Claire Captain Offline UFO the original and best! Posts: 122 Location: South East England Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #60 - Apr 18th, 2011 at 1:38pm Print Post Blue Shrew wrote on Apr 18th, 2011 at 3:47am: Quote:See, that's the superior quality beta we have. fluffs up mouse gray hair (squints to read text) Heh, wish I had grey hair to fluff up, mine is flat grey yes, but unfluffable! IP Logged
Claire Captain Offline UFO the original and best! Posts: 122 Location: South East England Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #61 - Apr 18th, 2011 at 1:40pm Print Post I agree it's another great chapter, that kid is diabolical you must have seen the kids round here sigh. Another absorbing read Amelia and Ed, can't wait for more. IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #62 - Apr 19th, 2011 at 4:42pm Print Post That child is in need of a spanking, Dr. Spock or no Dr. Spock! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Normandie Captain Offline UFO Rocks! Posts: 132 Location: In the veg patch... Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #63 - Apr 19th, 2011 at 5:24pm Print Post What a wonderfully evil child. IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #64 - Apr 19th, 2011 at 5:29pm Print Post Amelia - your avid (or should that be rabid?) fans are waiting for the final installment. You got Ed into this horrible predicament. Now you have to get him out, one way or another. NOW! If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #65 - Apr 19th, 2011 at 5:33pm Print Post I think the calvary was just over the hill. : What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Write Rat MajorSHADO Research Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #66 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 8:45am Print Post Librarian wrote on Apr 19th, 2011 at 5:29pm:Amelia - your avid (or should that be rabid?) fans are waiting for the final installment. You got Ed into this horrible predicament. Now you have to get him out, one way or another. NOW! We only take orders from Commander Straker. Actually, it's finished. Our beta has it now. Check your e-mail, Deborah. ED IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #67 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 11:01pm Print Post I may have missed some things in reformatting. Forgive me. My bad. But I know everybody's been waiting for this. Love Raphael the rabbit, BTW. If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #68 - Apr 21st, 2011 at 12:07am Print Post Brilliant, absolutlely brilliant! There is a lesson here, a big one. Having written a near death experience myself, this one really spoke to me. Bravo! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #69 - Apr 21st, 2011 at 2:53am Print Post Wow! That was quite a tale (pun intended.) When I remember that you said my story A Little Magic inspired it, I have to shake my head. It just goes to show you that you can give two writers the same exact premise and they'll come up with wildly different stories. I really liked your take on the idea. You're an incredible writer. You shouldn't worry that your story isn't good enough -- at all! « Last Edit: Apr 22nd, 2011 at 11:59pm by Neesierie » The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Claire Captain Offline UFO the original and best! Posts: 122 Location: South East England Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #70 - Apr 21st, 2011 at 6:57am Print Post Quote: You're an incredible writer. You shouldn't worry that your story isn't good enough -- at all! I second that Amelia you are an amazing writer. I have always been a fan of your work since the very early days of Mice, I couldn't get enough of it and it's still the same. Paw is a really wonderful story and you too have an exquisite heart. I applaud you « Last Edit: Apr 23rd, 2011 at 12:24am by SHADO Librarian » IP Logged
Write Rat Major Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #71 - Apr 21st, 2011 at 2:31pm Print Post I have to be truthful, and admit we didn't write the story. We stole it. From him. IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #72 - Apr 21st, 2011 at 3:04pm Print Post Obviously a relative of Harvey the Pookah. If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Blue Shrew Lieutenant Offline Did I wake you, Alec? Posts: 55 Location: Alec's Bedroom Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #73 - Apr 22nd, 2011 at 4:23am Print Post That last chapter had me near tears in places Nans IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #74 - Apr 22nd, 2011 at 1:48pm Print Post Quote:I'm glad Alec used Aegis to stop the coroner from doing the post mortem on Ellen. My only quibble (seing as I tend to include a lot of police procedural into my other stuff) - I doubt even Aegis could just stop the medical examiner from doing his(her) job and not raise really serious red flags all over. Aegis COULD order the file sealed or classified. But stopping an autopsy on a gunshot victim - Alec would have to have had the body sent to the FBI or another agency. And that's just a procedural quibble. Otherwise - wowsers. If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged