Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Jun 27th, 2010 at 5:19pm Print Post Ok gang, here we go again! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #1 - Jun 27th, 2010 at 7:04pm Print Post Oh, boy! We're going to have a baby! Two babies! Way to go, Ed and Ginny! IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #2 - Jun 27th, 2010 at 7:48pm Print Post Hmmm I can see where this is going to end up Couple of concerns though... although thing may well be different in US.Ginny would know exactly when they are due...or her fullterm date. They can tell to the day ! And if its twins, and she's over forty, then she would probably be on bed rest or strict rest in the last few weeks as twins often come early! You may want to rethink the timings! Sorry !! For her to be 36 weeks would be more 'reasonable' I think. But I like the way she is getting involved in the studio business.. ! AS long as they don't call one of the babies Howard! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #3 - Jun 27th, 2010 at 9:54pm Print Post I figured I may have to tweak the times a bit! Howard! Heaven no! Still noodling the names! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #4 - Jun 29th, 2010 at 1:17pm Print Post That's Ginny -- bossy as ever! Thanks for keeping her true to form, Matt! IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #5 - Jun 29th, 2010 at 6:29pm Print Post Oh my.... worried here... what is going to happen next? Ginny... Ed,..... Carlson?? Good tension Matt! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #6 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 7:03am Print Post Wow.... not what i was expecting by any means! Great stuff Matt... Next bit soon please! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #7 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 12:21pm Print Post I'll try to knock out a bit more before I have to go do work stuff. I hate this, I get a good story going and I have to stop for work. I know you feel my pain! And where's Denise? I want more of "The Devil is a Woman". I'm on the edge of my seat with that one too. You gals all keep me motivated! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #8 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 4:38pm Print Post Sorry, Matt! My work load is light at the moment, but life can be harder by far than a job, and I'm dealing with that instead! So the story will not get done quickly, I'm afraid. But I know where I'm going! Does that help? But yes, I feel your pain! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #9 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 4:42pm Print Post I've been there. I'll keep you in my thoughts! And good things are always worth waiting for. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #10 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 4:44pm Print Post LOve the discussion with Henderson about safety and the hint that they will not always get on... a very plausible 'background' to the Henderson/Straker confrontations in the future. Oh dear... Ginny.... you need some help now!! Hmmmm. Ed as midwife? I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #11 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 4:52pm Print Post He's military. He can handle it. Hey, Matt? Does he get to handle it? IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #12 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 5:17pm Print Post Now you don't want me to spoil it do you? Remember he's The Man! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #13 - Jul 1st, 2010 at 7:02am Print Post Reply#5 This is developing really well Matt. I like the way Paul has taken charge and organised everything; very nice detail. The conversations between Ed and Ginny are natural and unforced and the whole thing has an air of tension on three levels; the UFO, the saboteur and the babies! I think the way you reassured the reader that Ed would be able to deal with being a 'midwife' was very smooth .. not too much information and puts the focus to where it should be; will they be rescued, and will they catch the saboteur. Excellent work ! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt Reply #14 - Jul 1st, 2010 at 2:02pm Print Post Going nicely, Matt! But I want to meet the babies! Seriously though, I'm enjoying this new view of Paul. And getting to know Jen. Lots of good stuff going on in this story! I'm on the edge of my seat -- waiting for the saboteur to be unmasked! IP Logged
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