SHADO
Welcome, Guest. Please Login or Register

News:
Page Index Toggle Pages: [1] 2 3  Add Poll Send Topic
Very Hot Topic (More than 25 Replies) FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt (Read 8976 times)
Matt
Colonel
*****
Offline


Everyone at SHADO drinks
coffee!

Posts: 2391
Location: Coventry, RI
FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Jun 27th, 2010 at 5:19pm
Print Post  
Ok gang, here we go again! Smiley
  

What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Neesierie
Ex Member


Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #1 - Jun 27th, 2010 at 7:04pm
Print Post  
Oh, boy!  We're going to have a baby!  Smiley
Two babies!  Smiley

Way to go, Ed and Ginny!  Cheesy
  
Back to top
 
IP Logged
 
Lightcudder
Colonel
*****
Offline


Trust no one.

Posts: 1311
Location: Here. When you least expect it
Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #2 - Jun 27th, 2010 at 7:48pm
Print Post  
Hmmm I can see where this is going to end up 
Couple of concerns though... although thing may well be different in US.Ginny would know exactly when they are due...or her  fullterm date. They can tell to the day ! And if its twins, and she's over forty, then she would probably be on bed rest or strict rest in the last few weeks as twins often  come early!
You may want to rethink the timings!  Sorry !! For her to be 36 weeks would be more 'reasonable' I think.

But I like the way she is getting involved in the studio business.. ! AS long as they don't call one of the babies Howard! Shocked
  

I need some air.
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Matt
Colonel
*****
Offline


Everyone at SHADO drinks
coffee!

Posts: 2391
Location: Coventry, RI
Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #3 - Jun 27th, 2010 at 9:54pm
Print Post  
I figured I may have to tweak the times a bit! Smiley

Howard! Heaven no! Grin

Still noodling the names! Wink
  

What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Neesierie
Ex Member


Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #4 - Jun 29th, 2010 at 1:17pm
Print Post  
That's Ginny -- bossy as ever!  :Smiley  Thanks for keeping her true to form, Matt!
  
Back to top
 
IP Logged
 
Lightcudder
Colonel
*****
Offline


Trust no one.

Posts: 1311
Location: Here. When you least expect it
Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #5 - Jun 29th, 2010 at 6:29pm
Print Post  
Oh my.... worried here... what is going to happen next?

Ginny... Ed,..... Carlson??
Good tension Matt!
  Cheesy
  

I need some air.
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Lightcudder
Colonel
*****
Offline


Trust no one.

Posts: 1311
Location: Here. When you least expect it
Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #6 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 7:03am
Print Post  
Wow.... not what i was expecting by any  means!

Great stuff Matt...
Next bit soon please! Shocked
  

I need some air.
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Matt
Colonel
*****
Offline


Everyone at SHADO drinks
coffee!

Posts: 2391
Location: Coventry, RI
Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #7 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 12:21pm
Print Post  
I'll try to knock out a bit more before I have to go do work Tongue stuff. I hate this, I get a good story going and I have to stop for work. Smiley

I know you feel my pain! Cheesy

And where's Denise? I want more of "The Devil is a Woman". I'm on the edge of my seat with that one too. Smiley

You gals all keep me motivated! Smiley
  

What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Neesierie
Ex Member


Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #8 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 4:38pm
Print Post  
Sorry, Matt!  My work load is light at the moment, but life can be harder by far than a job, and I'm dealing with that instead!  Tongue  So the story will not get done quickly, I'm afraid.  But I know where I'm going!  Does that help?  :Smiley

But yes, I feel your pain!  Wink
  
Back to top
 
IP Logged
 
Matt
Colonel
*****
Offline


Everyone at SHADO drinks
coffee!

Posts: 2391
Location: Coventry, RI
Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #9 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 4:42pm
Print Post  
I've been there. I'll keep you in my thoughts! Smiley

And good things are always worth waiting for. Wink
  

What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Lightcudder
Colonel
*****
Offline


Trust no one.

Posts: 1311
Location: Here. When you least expect it
Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #10 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 4:44pm
Print Post  
LOve the discussion with Henderson about safety and the hint that they will not always get on... a very plausible 'background' to the Henderson/Straker confrontations in the future.
Oh dear... Ginny.... you need some help now!!

Hmmmm. Ed as midwife? Shocked
  

I need some air.
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Neesierie
Ex Member


Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #11 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 4:52pm
Print Post  
He's military.  He can handle it.  Wink

Hey, Matt?  Does he get to handle it?  :Smiley
  
Back to top
 
IP Logged
 
Matt
Colonel
*****
Offline


Everyone at SHADO drinks
coffee!

Posts: 2391
Location: Coventry, RI
Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #12 - Jun 30th, 2010 at 5:17pm
Print Post  
Now you don't want me to spoil it do you? Shocked

Remember he's The Man! Smiley
  

What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Lightcudder
Colonel
*****
Offline


Trust no one.

Posts: 1311
Location: Here. When you least expect it
Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #13 - Jul 1st, 2010 at 7:02am
Print Post  
Reply#5

This is developing really well Matt. I like the way Paul has taken charge and organised everything; very nice detail. Wink

The conversations between Ed and Ginny are natural and unforced and the whole thing has an air of tension on three levels; the UFO, the saboteur and the babies!
I think the way you reassured the reader that Ed would be able to deal with being a 'midwife' was very smooth Smiley.. not too much information and puts the focus to where it should be; will they be rescued, and will they catch the saboteur. Huh

Excellent work ! Cheesy
  

I need some air.
Back to top
WWW  
IP Logged
 
Neesierie
Ex Member


Re: FDK Expecting July's Challenge By Matt
Reply #14 - Jul 1st, 2010 at 2:02pm
Print Post  
Going nicely, Matt! But I want to meet the babies!  Smiley

Seriously though, I'm enjoying this new view of Paul.  And getting to know Jen.  Lots of good stuff going on in this story!  I'm on the edge of my seat -- waiting for the saboteur to be unmasked!  Shocked
  
Back to top
 
IP Logged
 
Page Index Toggle Pages: [1] 2 3 
Add Poll Send Topic
Bookmarks: del.icio.us Digg Facebook Google Google+ LinkedIn reddit StumbleUpon Twitter Yahoo