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Neesierie
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FDK Face-Off
Jul 5th, 2010 at 2:26am
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Here's where you can comment on this story.  It's a real humdinger, so I hope you will enjoy the ride!  Cheesy

I intend to!  Grin
  
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Re: FDK Face-Off
Reply #1 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 2:47am
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Humdinger is an understatement! Smiley

First a psycho Ginny, now a psycho Ed? Shocked

Ladies and Gentlemen, fasten your seatbelts please and lock your trays in the upright position. Grin
  

What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
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Reply #2 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 2:49am
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Hey!  He's not as bad as she was!  He didn't kill anyone!  Be nice, Matt!   Angry

He's just a little . . . lost right now.   :Smiley
  
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Reply #3 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 2:55am
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I'm sorry I couldn't resist! Grin

This one sound like another wild ride! Cheesy
  

What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
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Reply #4 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 6:59am
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This is incredible Denise, I am really enjoying it! The tension is too much though!!
I love Jackson.. and here is it at his very 'best'
And I have absolutlely no idea where this story is going ot or coming from.
Brilliant!

really looking forward to more!!
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Reply #5 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 8:40am
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I can actually hear Jackson's voice .. that silky smooth,

'good..... good...'   creepy

Interesting.”  Very creepy

'Yes.  Yes.  Go on.”   creepier than ever!


'And that crisis has been caused by you, Commander.  It is taking place right now.

“In your mind.”  Oh Boy!  Ed's losing it!
 
I'm getting paranoid now!

You do confrontation SO well!

MORE! Please! Shocked

  

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Reply #6 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 11:00am
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Jackson was (after Straker of course!) my favorite character in the show.  He was devious and cunning, and always had a hidden agenda.  I sometimes felt that he could end up being more of a threat to SHADO than the aliens ever were.  And I LOVED the way Vladek Sheybal played him!!!!  Kiss  So I guess I paid close attention to his speech patterns, facial movements, etc.  He was the doctor out of my every nightmare.  And that distrust I felt was sealed by the fact that Straker never really trusted him either.

Ed Bishop remarked more than once in interviews over the years that it was a waste of time trying to look good in any scene with the doctor, because Sheybal always stole the scene!  He considered him a consummate actor, and you know, he was!  Cool
  
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Reply #7 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 12:52pm
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I just added a few sentences to the final bit of Chapter 1.  It's not vital info, but it does help define the timeframe for the commander's 'episode.'  Nine minutes.  It seems like such a short amount of time, doesn't it?  :Smiley
  
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Reply #8 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 1:37pm
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Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee!”

Love it

And what did happen two weeks ago?

Can't wait!
A reallly good psychological story...... brilliant Denise!
  

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Reply #9 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 4:16pm
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This is great! Smiley Very good tension buildup here.

And Jackson is at his very best! Wink

And once again, it's about the coffee! Smiley

The two week bit at the end????

Cliffhanger! Smiley
  

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Reply #10 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 4:54pm
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Yes, Matt.  The comment about the coffee was for you!  Wink  Glad you caught it! 

BTW, Straker's not done complaining about being taken off coffee. *snicker*
  
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Reply #11 - Jul 5th, 2010 at 5:11pm
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He would be our Ed if he was! Wink

Looking forward to more. Smiley
  

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Re: FDK Face-Off
Reply #12 - Jul 6th, 2010 at 7:32am
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Angry  Angry  Angry

  SmileyI get up early. Smiley
  SmileyI rush through a shower Smiley
  ShockedI speed to work Shocked

  TongueI switch on my slow PC Embarrassed
  

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Reply #13 - Jul 6th, 2010 at 7:35am
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And this dratted Slow PC decides to post my message before I have finished....

And I wait

And what do I  find?

NO Update for FACE OFF


I am NOT a Happy Bunny
  

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Reply #14 - Jul 6th, 2010 at 7:59am
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Where's your bunny smiley?

*snicker*snicker*

Love you, Louise!  Blame my hubby.  He wanted to spend his holiday off work with me.  :Smiley
  
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