Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO FDK - Unwritten Laws Jul 22nd, 2012 at 6:56pm Print Post I've always known where this one was going, but it took a while before I finally figured out how to get it started. Here we go! Just FYI, this is the sequel to "Writer's Block." The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: FDK - Unwritten Laws Reply #1 - Jul 23rd, 2012 at 2:18am Print Post Poor Ed - retirement at his tender age. Can't wait for more. If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK - Unwritten Laws Reply #2 - Jul 23rd, 2012 at 1:22pm Print Post It seems he fights off retirement as often as he does the aliens. Nice start Denise, I was wondering when you were going to come back to this universe. Anna Sophia must have gotten lonely. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: FDK - Unwritten Laws Reply #3 - Jul 24th, 2012 at 2:20pm Print Post Well, it's not as if he will get to enjoy retirement for very long. But it's a great way to get him to finally MAKE HIS MOVE! : The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK - Unwritten Laws Reply #4 - Jul 24th, 2012 at 8:21pm Print Post Neesierie wrote on Jul 24th, 2012 at 2:20pm:Well, it's not as if he will get to enjoy retirement for very long. But it's a great way to get him to finally MAKE HIS MOVE! He can be stubborn when he wants to be! Remember how long it took him in Absence? What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: FDK - Unwritten Laws Reply #5 - Jul 27th, 2012 at 2:30am Print Post I'm writing it for the 'secrets' challenge on the scifi forever forum. Straker's not the only one with something he doesn't want to share in this tale. Anne has a few secrets of her own in this story. We'll see who ends up telling all first! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: FDK - Unwritten Laws Reply #6 - Aug 2nd, 2012 at 12:10pm Print Post Here's chapter 1! As I get older, I question more and more the unspoken rules of our society. It's the rebel in me, I guess. But most of them just seem stupid. If communication is the key to understanding each other, then why are we so often bound to silence? Anyway, in chapter 2 Leona returns with some good news -- and some bad news. Stay tuned! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK - Unwritten Laws Reply #7 - Aug 14th, 2012 at 11:29pm Print Post Okay Ed, are you listening? Quit over analyzing the situation and ask her to marry you. She's a woman, not an alien. Typical of Straker to play out the worst case scenrio, it serves him well when dealing with the aliens, but not with the woman he loves, and the one who loves him. Sorry it's taken me a while to post a comment, life is still crazy around here. I've been doing some writing as well but not UFO or Sci-Fi. Looking forward to the next chapter. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: FDK - Unwritten Laws Reply #8 - Aug 15th, 2012 at 10:51pm Print Post Thanks, Matt! I completely understand about how life keeps you busy. It's been an interesting year for me so far. A few more hours added to each day MIGHT help. Maybe. Good luck with your writing! I look forward to reading more of your story! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
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