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FDK - Unwritten Laws
Jul 22nd, 2012 at 6:56pm
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I've always known where this one was going, but it took a while before I finally figured out how to get it started.  Here we go!  Smiley

Just FYI, this is the sequel to "Writer's Block."
  

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Reply #1 - Jul 23rd, 2012 at 2:18am
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Poor Ed - retirement at his tender age. Cheesy

Can't wait for more.
  

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Reply #2 - Jul 23rd, 2012 at 1:22pm
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It seems he fights off retirement as often as he does the aliens. Wink Nice start Denise, I was wondering when you were going to come back to this universe. Anna Sophia must have gotten lonely. Kiss Wink
  

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Reply #3 - Jul 24th, 2012 at 2:20pm
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Well, it's not as if he will get to enjoy retirement for very long.  Wink  But it's a great way to get him to finally MAKE HIS MOVE!  :Smiley
  

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Reply #4 - Jul 24th, 2012 at 8:21pm
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Neesierie wrote on Jul 24th, 2012 at 2:20pm:
Well, it's not as if he will get to enjoy retirement for very long.  Wink  But it's a great way to get him to finally MAKE HIS MOVE!  :Smiley

He can be stubborn when he wants to be! Remember how long it took him in Absence? Cheesy
  

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Reply #5 - Jul 27th, 2012 at 2:30am
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I'm writing it for the 'secrets' challenge on the scifi forever forum.  Straker's not the only one with something he doesn't want to share in this tale.  Anne has a few secrets of her own in this story.  Wink  We'll see who ends up telling all first!  Grin
  

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Reply #6 - Aug 2nd, 2012 at 12:10pm
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Here's chapter 1!  Smiley
As I get older, I question more and more the unspoken rules of our society.  It's the rebel in me, I guess.  But most of them just seem stupid.  If communication is the key to understanding each other, then why are we so often bound to silence? 
Anyway, in chapter 2 Leona returns with some good news -- and some bad news.  Stay tuned!   Cool
  

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Reply #7 - Aug 14th, 2012 at 11:29pm
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Okay Ed, are you listening? Quit over analyzing the situation and ask her to marry you. She's a woman, not an alien.

Typical of Straker to play out the worst case scenrio, it serves him well when dealing with the aliens, but not with the woman he loves, and the one who loves him.

Sorry it's taken me a while to post a comment, life is still crazy around here. I've been doing some writing as well but not UFO or Sci-Fi.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
  

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Reply #8 - Aug 15th, 2012 at 10:51pm
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Thanks, Matt!  I completely understand about how life keeps you busy.  It's been an interesting year for me so far.  A few more hours added to each day MIGHT help.  Maybe.  Tongue
Good luck with your writing!  I look forward to reading more of your story!  Cool
  

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