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Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take
Reply #30 - Aug 3rd, 2010 at 6:57pm
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Yeah, Matt.  I figured that.  I've been doing a lot of listening to UFO myself the past two days.  Wink 

I sure miss that mutual friend!  :Smiley
  
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Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take
Reply #31 - Aug 3rd, 2010 at 7:46pm
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Dragon, The aliens are about to spring their trap, its going to get ugly, and poor Ginny is going to be in the thick of it! Shocked

Denise I second that emotion! Wink
  

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Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take
Reply #32 - Aug 4th, 2010 at 12:19am
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Chapter 3 reposted with minor revisions and additions. Wink
  

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Reply #33 - Aug 4th, 2010 at 12:22am
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Wow!  Very nice insight into the inner workings of the commander, Matt!  Cool
  
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Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take
Reply #34 - Aug 4th, 2010 at 3:09am
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That's really how I see him; to be as well respected as he was there had to be an underlying reason. (It certainly wasn't because they were all drinking buddies.Grin) The only thing that makes sense to me is Ed had to care deeply for each and every person under his command, and he went through pure hell everytime he lost one. That fact had to be well known, heck even Paul saw that. Cheesy I really don't know how the poor man kept his sanity.

And for me allowed to sit in the chair of "The Man". Talk about feeling unworthy. :Smiley
  

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Reply #35 - Aug 4th, 2010 at 9:11am
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Hi Matt,

love the last bit immensely!

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Reply #36 - Aug 4th, 2010 at 1:14pm
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I think it's awesome that you got to sit in his chair!  Cheesy  Some of us have no hope of ever getting to do something as cool as that!  :Smiley 
Although I guess if I had to choose, it's still better to have slept in his bed!!!  Kiss
  
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Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take
Reply #37 - Aug 4th, 2010 at 1:26pm
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I can see your where you would be coming from! Cheesy

I thought it was very nice of him to let me speak with my honey! Kiss

That's our Ed! Smiley
  

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Reply #38 - Aug 4th, 2010 at 6:38pm
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Very cleverly executed scaling up of the tension levels, Matt!  Also, I like how Straker is appreciating your worth as a member of the team.  (See?  You're not unworthy!)  Wink

What's next?  :Smiley
  
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Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take
Reply #39 - Aug 4th, 2010 at 6:47pm
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Now we've got to bring in the aliens! Cheesy
  

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Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take
Reply #40 - Aug 5th, 2010 at 3:58am
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I made some minor changes and added a bit to chapter four. Wink

I hope Ginny survived! Shocked
  

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Reply #41 - Aug 5th, 2010 at 4:20am
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Hi,

nice, and I hope you're not setting Matt up tp die  Shocked I happen to like him  Grin
  
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Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take
Reply #42 - Aug 5th, 2010 at 12:25pm
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Denise told me the same thing when I wrote "Matters of the Heart", the prequel, she demamded a happy ending! Cheesy
  

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Reply #43 - Aug 5th, 2010 at 2:30pm
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I'm still demanding one, Matt!  Wink 
Wow!  Telling the Big Man how it's going to be, huh?  Well, I'll say this for you.  You've got some serious stones!  Grin
  
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Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take
Reply #44 - Aug 5th, 2010 at 3:22pm
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Denise, let me know if you think that was too forceful. I want it to seem that Ed really has no choice in that matter due to curcumstance, not because Matt is telling him what to do. Cheesy

If I have to rewrite that a bit I will, I don't want to disrespect the man! Smiley
  

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