Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #45 - Aug 5th, 2010 at 8:04pm Print Post No, no, Matt! I was impressed. I didn't think it was overboard at all! Very well written and executed. I was just in awe of you momentarily. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #46 - Aug 5th, 2010 at 8:11pm Print Post Wow, Denise was in awe of lil' ol' me? Now I am honored! All kidding aside "Matt" has nothing but respect for Ed. I thought the wordless conversation spoke volumes there. Two men with very similar values, caught by curcumstance. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #47 - Aug 6th, 2010 at 12:03am Print Post Chapter 4 is done and consolidated with a few small revisions. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #48 - Aug 6th, 2010 at 1:50am Print Post Yea! Ginny's alive! Aren't we all relieved! : Now, Matt. Get to work! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #49 - Aug 6th, 2010 at 3:41am Print Post I'm on it Colonel Felt! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #50 - Aug 6th, 2010 at 4:25pm Print Post Hi Matt, I 'm back....... properly this time but suffering from jet lag (not really...just had a fire alarm in the hotel at 1.30am... false alarm, but I'm knackered!) I downloaded Glitch and started a review/beta read on it, but as you seem to have done sopme revisions, I'll go over the new version. I am really really impressed with this story! Loving the techno-babble... not too detailed, but enough to kep the reader interested and also sets SHADO up as a very futuristic organisation. Shaping up to be a great story! Looking forward to more I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #51 - Aug 6th, 2010 at 9:04pm Print Post Welcome back Louise, you were greatly missed! I hope you and your hubby had a great time. And you got to speak with The Man while you were in Scotland! It doesn't get any better than that! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #52 - Aug 7th, 2010 at 2:37am Print Post Wow! Great repair work, Matt! One thing. If the doctor assumed that Matt knew his wife was pregnant, why would he (the doctor) plan to tell Ginny the news when she woke? Because the only way Matt could have known was if Ginny had told him -- right? Or am I missing something? IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #53 - Aug 7th, 2010 at 2:46am Print Post Good point, I'll have to fix that! I may not know much about utronics, but I can fix an S-Band microwave! Besides Colonel Felt told me to get to work, and she in in good with The Man! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #54 - Aug 7th, 2010 at 3:01am Print Post I'm really enjoying this story. And can't wait to see how Matt gets it all fixed in the end! Go, Matt! IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #55 - Aug 7th, 2010 at 7:39pm Print Post knee deep in ironing... very smooth Matt! Very very smooth! Extra bonus points for the way it was done! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Guina Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #56 - Aug 7th, 2010 at 8:43pm Print Post Hi Matt, very smooth way of husband telling wife (instead of vice versa) she's preggers IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #57 - Aug 7th, 2010 at 9:28pm Print Post Feisty Ginny! You go, girl! IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #58 - Aug 8th, 2010 at 6:44am Print Post Rats! The baddies are back! I just knew that was going to happen! IP Logged
Guina Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #59 - Aug 8th, 2010 at 1:02pm Print Post Hi Matt, great cliffhanger! IP Logged
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