Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #15 - Jun 18th, 2011 at 3:57pm Print Post Cool! More action that is, now packing and moving, that's a different story. I don't envy you! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #16 - Jun 19th, 2011 at 5:59pm Print Post You and Sue could drop by and help. Seriously, though. I've always considered myself extremely adaptable and able to accept change. But there's just something about a move when you have to do all the packing yourself that gets to me every time! How much I'd love to have a moving service for this move! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #17 - Jun 20th, 2011 at 11:46am Print Post If you lived close by I would, of course I'd have to drag Sue by the hair, kicking and screaming. She hates moving as much as I do. I hope all is well with the move! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #18 - Jun 21st, 2011 at 2:26am Print Post I don't know where I'd be without my friends! They drop off boxes or come by for an hour to help pack. Thank God! I might actually be ready to leave on Saturday! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #19 - Jun 21st, 2011 at 1:47pm Print Post Anyone who helps you move is a true friend! And with all the stress of moving, it can be a real test of that friendship! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #20 - Jul 11th, 2011 at 10:42pm Print Post So the changes didn't get posted yet. But maybe I can get that done tonight. I didn't change a lot; just reworked the 2nd and 3rd chapters so that the reader isn't aware that Straker's okay for a while. My beta tester likes it better this way. The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #21 - Jul 13th, 2011 at 7:21pm Print Post Alterations are done! Hopefully, you'll enjoy it this way much more than the original way I had it. Chapter 5 is being written now. I need to add more to the scene with Alec and Nyt though. The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #22 - Jul 13th, 2011 at 8:11pm Print Post The revised version does work better, it's much more suspenseful. So, what will Alec think of Nyt? : (Remember Alec, Nyt is a lady so you had better be a gentleman.) What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #23 - Jul 14th, 2011 at 12:01pm Print Post Here you are, Matt! After your long wait while I moved, here's the conversation between Nyt and Alec! Enjoy! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #24 - Jul 17th, 2011 at 2:40pm Print Post I like it! I wonder what he told Henderson? : Nyt seems to be in a wee bit of a quandry, what is she to do, indeed? The Commander seems to have that effect on quite a few people, it would seem that the "keepers" are not impervious to his charms. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #25 - Jul 19th, 2011 at 3:30pm Print Post My beta tester was pissed that I didn't write the scene with Henderson! I told her, "Anybody could write that scene -- and it would sound the same!" The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #26 - Jul 20th, 2011 at 1:41pm Print Post It depends on whether Alec told him the truth.... "Have you lost your mind, Colonel Freeman?" What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #27 - Jul 20th, 2011 at 4:38pm Print Post Alec? Tell Henderson the truth???? In what universe? : The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #28 - Jul 20th, 2011 at 7:07pm Print Post Mine, of course. And that is how it could be different. Remember, you're talking to a crazy writer, who made a UFO/Bonanza crossover work. The turbolift doesn't go all the way to the bridge. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Another Fairy Tale -- FDK Reply #29 - Jul 20th, 2011 at 7:24pm Print Post Okay. I suppose I can accept that some people have thought processes waaaaaay different from mine. (walks away shaking head and muttering) The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
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