Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI The Bodyguard FDK Mar 5th, 2011 at 11:39pm Print Post Wrote this last year, but somehow it didn't get posted here. Enjoy! Quote:“Yes, swing by medical and have Colonel Lake released and brought here. I’m not leaving her to Jackson’s tender mercies overnight. After that, have Foster brought here as well. In chains!” My favorite line. *snicker* What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #1 - Mar 6th, 2011 at 2:44am Print Post I love this story, Matt! It's one of my favorites of yours. Thanks for posting it on this forum! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #2 - Mar 6th, 2011 at 3:23am Print Post It's not Paul's favorite. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Write Rat MajorSHADO Research Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #3 - Mar 6th, 2011 at 6:56am Print Post It's always the nice, quiet, respectable authors you have to watch out for. (Amelia backs away from Matt and runs and hides behind beta.) What do you mean I'm a yellow guild member? Kill Foster! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #4 - Mar 6th, 2011 at 4:05pm Print Post This one scared me when I wrote it. Looking at it now almost a year later I can see loads of mistakes. Another one to add to my re-write list. Not really a bad thing as I plan to revisit this universe in Dark SHADO. Amelia, if this one scared you, I wouldn't read Dark Desire, be warned, very adult! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #5 - Mar 6th, 2011 at 5:25pm Print Post A spoof on Psychobombs 165 SHADO HQ Main control room. Col. Lake has just been told that Foster is coming in with Linda Simmons. LAKE; "He what!" Lake storms into the Commander’s office. LAKE; "Foster is bringing Linda Simmons to the studio." Pauses. "Commander did you hear what I said?" STRAKER; "I heard." LAKE; Worried, frustrated. "But she is programmed to kill you." STRAKER; "Her target is also this control. I’d rather fight that situation on my own terms. When she arrives take her straight to room twenty-two." LAKE; "But Commander…" STRAKER; Perturbed. "That’s all, Colonel." Lake is brought up short and storms out of the office working up a good mad. She runs into Foster in the corridor and pulls out her pistol and shoots him dead. Close up Lake’s face; A satisfying smile and a nod. As much as I pick on Paul, he can be a very strong and likable character when written well. « Last Edit: Mar 7th, 2011 at 12:45am by Matt » What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Write Rat MajorSHADO Research Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #6 - Mar 9th, 2011 at 9:57pm Print Post Quote:Lake is brought up short and storms out of the office working up a good mad. She runs into Foster in the corridor and pulls out her pistol and shoots him dead. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #7 - Mar 9th, 2011 at 10:04pm Print Post In that episode, I think she really wanted to, she was spitting tacks! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #8 - Mar 9th, 2011 at 10:23pm Print Post Actually, I think she was ready to shoot both Foster and Straker for being idiots in that one. If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #9 - Mar 9th, 2011 at 10:25pm Print Post You could be right, Deb! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #10 - Mar 9th, 2011 at 11:30pm Print Post Well, the script certainly wrote them both acting foolishly! Do you have any idea how hard it was to try to give either of them a decent reason in my story 'The Bodyguard'? Sheesh! What were they thinking? : The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Write Rat Major Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #11 - Mar 9th, 2011 at 11:40pm Print Post Quote:Sheesh! What were they thinking? That's just it. They weren't. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #12 - Mar 9th, 2011 at 11:46pm Print Post Almost as bad as The Responsibility Seat. As I remember Foster did okay in that one. I have no idea what Ed was thinking! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: The Bodyguard FDK Reply #13 - Mar 10th, 2011 at 12:22am Print Post Poor writing. That's all I can say. I have to admit, I haven't yet come across any UFO fanfic that was as bad as some of those scripts. Close, maybe. But definitely not that badly written! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
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