Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Gar Barusch FDK Feb 23rd, 2011 at 3:51am Print Post I tend to play around with certain themes and scenarios more than others. Perhaps this may seem repetitious to some, but to me it's merely a chance to explore some other avenue of the same idea. In this story, we deal with amnesia again! I just love amnesia stories!!! Only this time, the person with amnesia is different from every other scenario I've worked with in the past. So it's a whole new ballgame, even though the theme remains the same. I hope you'll enjoy this story as it unfolds. Personally, I can't wait till the end myself, since I have no idea what will happen! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #1 - Feb 23rd, 2011 at 4:11am Print Post I noticed that he still has the swoon effect on the ladies, even offworld. Great start. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #2 - Feb 23rd, 2011 at 4:39am Print Post Well, yeah. Some things are a given, after all. The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #3 - Feb 23rd, 2011 at 5:02am Print Post I was just thinking about my amnesia/time travel story today. That was a lot of fun! I still don't know how I managed to pull that one off. : What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #4 - Feb 23rd, 2011 at 3:36pm Print Post You did well, Matt. Ginny with amnesia was great! *snicker*snicker* The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #5 - Feb 23rd, 2011 at 3:42pm Print Post Pam sent me a note on Marc's e-group, she wants to read it! BTW she sent you an open letter, if you haven't seen it already. I think the offworld aspect of this is an interesting twist. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #6 - Feb 23rd, 2011 at 3:46pm Print Post I saw her post. She'll like the story. I was surprised how much I liked it myself. Not because of you, of course, but because it was a western. You did excellent work with that one, Matt! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #7 - Feb 23rd, 2011 at 3:52pm Print Post Did you ever read her Dallas crossover? Deep in the Heart of Texas I was amazed as to how well that worked. JR was outgunned and outclassed! I roared over Lucy and Paul. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #8 - Feb 23rd, 2011 at 9:36pm Print Post Yeah, it was a real trip to read. I never watched Dallas, but I knew the personalities of the characters, because the previews gave enough away in themselves. I really liked her take on it. She's awesome. The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #9 - Feb 23rd, 2011 at 9:52pm Print Post I did watch Dallas, and I've got to tell you. Pam nailed it! All the way around. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #10 - Feb 24th, 2011 at 4:24pm Print Post Chapter 2 is up! Enjoy! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #11 - Feb 24th, 2011 at 8:20pm Print Post I hope Alec survived. Loved the bit about Jackson. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #12 - Feb 24th, 2011 at 11:06pm Print Post It wouldn't be Straker if he didn't despise Jackson (at least, according to several of the episodes anyway.) BTW, my daughter is enjoying him having such a common-type name. Of course, even she doesn't know yet the real meaning behind his name. But it's intriguing that she likes it. What are your thoughts? Inquiring minds are inquiring! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #13 - Feb 24th, 2011 at 11:55pm Print Post I figured there was something behind the name, but I have no idea what it is. I'm sure it will become clear later in the story. It's a very interesting plot. I just finished and posted the rest of Chapter 8 for Absence and I just have to write the epilogue. I'm not sure yet where this story will go in my saga. Because I used flashback I may put it after the first part of Soul Mates once I do the rewrite. I'm thinking it will be a better overall story once it's broken up and edited. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Write Rat MajorSHADO Research Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States Re: Gar Barusch FDK Reply #14 - Feb 25th, 2011 at 12:26am Print Post Quote:Of course, even she doesn't know yet the real meaning behind his name. But it's intriguing that she likes it. What are your thoughts? Inquiring minds are inquiring! If you mean the name Gar Barusch for the Commander, I totally agree with the Gar part of it, Denise. As for Barusch I believe I agree with it too, if I've interpreted it correctly. IP Logged
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