Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Sep 19th, 2010 at 3:28pm Print Post Here we go again! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 657 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #1 - Sep 19th, 2010 at 3:56pm Print Post It's good to see people posting again - it's good to be able to post again. Good start on this - I do read, even if I don't comment much. If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Guina Ex Member Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #2 - Sep 19th, 2010 at 4:43pm Print Post Hi Matt, oyeh - poor Ginny! And you come out meaner to Straker than Louise or Dragon! IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #3 - Sep 19th, 2010 at 5:46pm Print Post So glad that someone else is mean to Ed.. not just me. A very tempting start to the story Matt. A totally unexpected turn of events..! There may be trouble ahead, but while there's moonlight and music and love and romance..... Let's face the music and dance!! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #4 - Sep 19th, 2010 at 6:57pm Print Post Mean to Ed? Oh, you must mean pairing him back up with Mary! In this universe Mary has grown up (kinda like Full Circle). Now poor Ginny, I'm certainly being mean to her, she's in love with Ed and ends up getting jilted. And no Matt in this universe to comfort her. Break out the vodka! « Last Edit: Sep 19th, 2010 at 9:22pm by Matt » What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #5 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 7:15am Print Post A great start to Chapter 1. I like the more detailed conversation with the descriptions, easy and 'comfortable' to read to read if you get my drift! A very promising scenario. I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #6 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 3:56pm Print Post I had to adjust the time period a bit. This one takes place nine months after Timelash instead of three. That would put this story in January of 1985, by my timeline. (Right in the middle of the Russian winter!) What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Guina Ex Member Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #7 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 4:12pm Print Post Hi Matt, Quote:Right in the middle of the Russian winter! Ouch. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #8 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 4:59pm Print Post I added a tad more to chapter 1. Poor Ginny, she's going to hate me after this story. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #9 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 8:25pm Print Post And the plot thickens! A bit more added to chapter one. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Kira-kun Ex Member Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #10 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 9:40pm Print Post Mmmmm .... this should be intriguing ... and that's exactly the word I wanted ... LOL. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #11 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 10:54pm Print Post Intriguing; Data's way of saying Facinating! Just posted a bit more, one more scene should wrap up the chapter! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #12 - Sep 21st, 2010 at 8:48pm Print Post Chapter one is done! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Guina Ex Member Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #13 - Sep 21st, 2010 at 9:00pm Print Post Hi Matt, love it so far!!! (that will change if Ed marries Mary again... grumblegrumble...) IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva Reply #14 - Sep 21st, 2010 at 9:13pm Print Post The Ed/Mary aspect is superficial although in this universe Mary as grown considerably since they divorced so she's not like we saw in the series. I needed to get Ginny into a place of hurt and jealousy and using Mary was one of several scenerios I had considered. As I said before Ginny may never speak to me again after this. I'm going to be really mean to her. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged