Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK In Training Reply #45 - Aug 22nd, 2010 at 7:24pm Print Post See.. It was a good idea to do the letter! Gulp. Poor Virginia! Good job we know that Matt is still alive then, or I'd be crying over my computer.. - not good for the circuits! Nice work Matt. I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK In Training Reply #46 - Aug 22nd, 2010 at 7:29pm Print Post Lightcudder wrote on Aug 19th, 2010 at 4:04pm:You need to do some serious grovelling now Matt! That was some pretty serious grovelling! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK In Training Reply #47 - Aug 23rd, 2010 at 4:05am Print Post See? I was right. The contents of the letter were superfluous. It was enough that she read it and that she cried. Having the contents there ruined it for my imagination. : So, tell me. What are the aliens up to now? IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK In Training Reply #48 - Aug 23rd, 2010 at 1:13pm Print Post Mixed reviews, oh well. : I could always just give pieces of the letter in the final draft? The baddies are up to no good, and they're coming back. Guess what's following that American sub, it ain't Santa Claus! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK In Training Reply #49 - Aug 23rd, 2010 at 2:25pm Print Post Sorry, Matt. The final decision is yours, you know. Just thought you'd want to know how it struck me. A lot of writers these days don't give their readers credit for any creativity of their own. In most respects, they have a point. But I'm used to having some space to imagine in the stories I read. And I like that. (But I may not be considered an average reader!) : No worries. It's a great story! And I'm still on the edge of my seat. So go write Matt out of this crisis! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK In Training Reply #50 - Aug 23rd, 2010 at 2:35pm Print Post Thanks Denise, you know I always appreciate an honest response. I am toying with the idea of only reveling portions of the letter in Ginny's thoughts in the final draft some internal dialogue as to how it affected her instead of the text itself. Anyway Matt has to risk detection in order to save an American sub! Rig torpedoes fully ready! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK In Training Reply #51 - Aug 23rd, 2010 at 6:34pm Print Post Chapter 4 id done and pulled into one post! Onward to chapter 5. "Now let's see if he can hear us." What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK In Training Reply #52 - Aug 24th, 2010 at 2:33pm Print Post Okay, added a bit more to chapter five, right now in the calm before the storm! I need to make a dramatic climax here, I need some more greenies and I only have one left! : What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK In Training Reply #53 - Aug 24th, 2010 at 4:38pm Print Post More posted to chapter five! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK In Training Reply #54 - Aug 24th, 2010 at 5:16pm Print Post Damn it, Matt! Let Ginny at her! I want to see her get hers! You know Straker won't mind! BTW, great save in the sub! It felt like a scene right out of Red October. (That's a compliment, not a criticism!) IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK In Training Reply #55 - Aug 24th, 2010 at 6:28pm Print Post That would be a very bloody scene indeed! I think my Ginny is feeling a bit like her dark universe counterpart right now. I may just let her have her revenge! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK In Training Reply #56 - Aug 24th, 2010 at 6:31pm Print Post Just think -- it would be therapeutic. And cheer her right up! IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK In Training Reply #57 - Aug 24th, 2010 at 8:57pm Print Post Great stuff as usual Matt. I like Ginny's anger and desire for revenge. And now Mattt is at the dome.. hmm... what is going to happen next I wonder. And will Ed get the info he needs? I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK In Training Reply #58 - Aug 24th, 2010 at 9:47pm Print Post Chapter 5 is done, now I've got to turn up the heat for chapter six, we still have one UFO that is MIA and an unknown number of baddies at HQ. Hopefully this will turn into a wild ride! Ginny just might get her revenge, but it will be bittersweet. : What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK In Training Reply #59 - Aug 25th, 2010 at 2:43am Print Post Good work, Matt! Enjoyable dialogue in the dome as they work. And Straker certainly was brave to beard the lioness in her den, so to speak. IP Logged
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