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Reply #75 - Aug 25th, 2010 at 5:14pm
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Just read the new additions.  Damn it, Matt!  Angry  I told you Ginny should have gone for her!  Why don't you listen?  Wink  I was looking forward to that sex scene!  Now you're going to make me wait!  :Smiley
  
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Reply #76 - Aug 25th, 2010 at 6:01pm
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Ginny would have gone after her, but Ed wouldn't let her. Grin I couldn't do anything cause I've got my hands full commanding Skydiver! Cheesy Blame Ed, it's all his fault! Wink

That means I'm going to have to write two sex scenes, you know Ginny's going to be wanting to make up big time! Kiss Plus Ed and Jen's first time, woo hoo! Kiss I don't know if I can handle this, I might have to leave it to the imagination! Grin

Matt on Skydiver, don't forget the broom tied to the periscope! Cheesy (I'll explain in the story!) Wink
  

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Reply #77 - Aug 25th, 2010 at 6:16pm
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Lightcudder wrote on Aug 25th, 2010 at 1:55pm:
Oh.. did you get the scan of the latest pic? I'm putting it in the local show in ten days.. Hope to win a prize.. with one of them at least! He's on my desk, staring at me. Drool.. really pleased with the eyes on this one. Aren't I always?

Matt... Not managed to start Ginny yet... But I'll get round to her next week.. Glitch took over!
 

Was that the one at the top Louise? (It doesn't matter they're all good!) The eyes did come out very well! Wink

No worries about Ginny, I can wait. Smiley
  

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Reply #78 - Aug 25th, 2010 at 8:04pm
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Posted some more to chapter six! Standby for action! Cheesy
  

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Reply #79 - Aug 26th, 2010 at 1:39am
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Lightcudder wrote on Aug 25th, 2010 at 1:00pm:
Have you got a submarine simulator there Matt?...... really detailed, convincing  dialogue.   I can imagine you sitting there, glued to the periscope.. watching as Suzanne makes tea.

It's funny because this decribes one night when she was over my apatrment back when we were dating! I told her I would put it away but she wanted to watch me sink the Yamoto! Cheesy
  

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Reply #80 - Aug 26th, 2010 at 1:43am
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denisefelt wrote on Aug 25th, 2010 at 1:54pm:
Dang!  You too?  Okay.  Who's playing with the weather machine?  Angry

It's those danged aliens! Cheesy
  

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Reply #81 - Aug 26th, 2010 at 2:31pm
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Chapter six is complete! Wink
  

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Reply #82 - Aug 26th, 2010 at 5:36pm
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I made some changes to chapter six, mostly concerning Ginny and reposted the corrected chapter. Wink
  

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Reply #83 - Aug 26th, 2010 at 6:26pm
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Like this better, Matt!  Grin  Grreat revision!  Oh, and kudos to you for staying calm under pressure in the sub!  Wink
  
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Reply #84 - Aug 26th, 2010 at 6:39pm
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Nah.. can't be Jen...can it? Shocked

ooo errr! Huh

Watch out Ed! Wink


Really scary moment there.. forum disapeared on me for about 5 minutes!  Major withdrawal symptoms!
  

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Reply #85 - Aug 26th, 2010 at 6:47pm
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Yeah that was strange! Undecided

Gotcha thinking don't I Louise? :Smiley

Denise, I like the rewrite better as well, I thought about it and even being pregnant, she's still Ginny and that means fire and sass! She'd do something. Wink
  

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Reply #86 - Aug 26th, 2010 at 8:43pm
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A bit more posted to chapter seven. Jen being in cahoots with the baddies would have been perfect but I like her character to much to do that to her. Wink

Besides that would have broke Ed's heart, we can't have that now can we. Cheesy
  

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Reply #87 - Aug 27th, 2010 at 6:37pm
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Just posted a bit more to chapter seven.

Ginny is sitting on my desk gazing at me... :Smiley *drool*
  

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Reply #88 - Aug 27th, 2010 at 7:07pm
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Getting pretty tense now Matt.. Ed tied up (!) Natiroff on the prowl . Matt in deep water!

And a cliff hanger Angry

  Wink Wink Wink
Loving it!
  

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Re: FDK In Training
Reply #89 - Aug 27th, 2010 at 9:51pm
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Chapter 7 is done! Onward and forward! Smiley
  

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