Neesierie Ex Member FDK Face Up Aug 17th, 2010 at 4:31am Print Post Well, here it is! Hopefully we can solve the mystery of why the aliens are interested in Loch Mhor before this story is over. Just in case you were still wondering. IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Face Up Reply #1 - Aug 17th, 2010 at 7:11am Print Post Yippee! Got up early... (yes, I know you all get up earlier than me but i'm on holiday.....so 7.30 am is dead early.. I'm usually halfway to work by that time!) and found Face Up on the forum. Quick read through... I'll do a decent chapter review later, when I am more awake! One or two 'extra lovely' points stand out.. where Cail thinks 'the man of her dreams'...in more ways than one Cait.. hints to the past and the future Shannon's whole personality.. what a smashing girl! Eds acceptance of her, and the sad realisation that he cannot admit he is her father, Oh and Alec and Miss Ealand.. still flirting! Loving it! and the intrigue.. Loch Mhor, Aliens etc.. plenty to come in this story yet! Super! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #2 - Aug 17th, 2010 at 12:44pm Print Post She steps up to the plate, here's the pitch, she swings, a hit, and it's going, going, it's gone! Another home run! Seriously Denise, a great start! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #3 - Aug 17th, 2010 at 1:51pm Print Post Thanks, guys! Like Louise, I just got up and it's nice to see that my cheering section is already hard at work! I've surprised myself with how much I want to write this story, and it's hard not to just skip to the end and the climax of it all. But I'll try to be patient. I don't want to rush and miss scenes between the newlyweds, their daughter, certain HQ staff, and of course, Antoine! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #4 - Aug 17th, 2010 at 1:53pm Print Post I think Ginny is jealous! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #5 - Aug 17th, 2010 at 1:58pm Print Post You think right, Matt! It's always fun to let her be as bad as she wants to be! Mostly I make her behave, since I have plans for her later on in a series. But in the few worlds I've created where I don't intend to marry her off to some sweet guy, I let her misbehave as much as she wants to. And boy! Does she want to! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #6 - Aug 17th, 2010 at 2:03pm Print Post Yeah, she's a feisty one, trust me, I know this! BTW I finally found my muse this morning, she went AWOL on me for a few days! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #7 - Aug 17th, 2010 at 2:06pm Print Post Alright, Matt! New story time! My muse is so upset at being ignored last week while I dealt with issues in the real world that she won't let me rest now until this story is done! But you know -- I don't mind! IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #8 - Aug 17th, 2010 at 3:21pm Print Post I adjusted a few lines of dialogue between Cait and Antoine in Chapter 1 to give it more bounce. (Just FYI.) IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #9 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 2:12am Print Post Hey I just noticed something, Ed's tux sounded somewhat familiar! : What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #10 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 3:00am Print Post Gee! Can't think how that happened! : *snicker*snicker* IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #11 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 3:03am Print Post I wasn't sure the first time so I went back to read it again! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #12 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 3:14am Print Post Oooo Cait, Ooooo Ed, now that was a love scene! Beautiful Denise! (Okay where's the leak?) What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Face Up Reply #13 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 6:12am Print Post DEnise! you got a table in the story! reat chapter. Loved Eds concentration in HQ.....command mode ! and the hints about Cait... Fosters perception of Ed is really good. thoroughly enjoying this! (typing slowly in the dark here!) I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #14 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 1:45pm Print Post Oh, my! I did get a table in there, didn't I? See, Louise, how you rub off on me? IP Logged
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