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Reply #15 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 2:15pm
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I'm waiting. Patiently.



Okay Enough patient waiting.

CHAPTER 3 NOW please!!!
  

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Reply #16 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 2:45pm
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Sorry, Louise!  The Chamber of Commerce is calling!  My meeting is in fifteen minutes.  I'll put it up when I get back, okay?
  
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Reply #17 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 3:08pm
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denisefelt wrote on Aug 17th, 2010 at 1:58pm:
You think right, Matt!  Wink

It's always fun to let her be as bad as she wants to be!  Mostly I make her behave, since I have plans for her later on in a series.  But in the few worlds I've created where I don't intend to marry her off to some sweet guy, I let her misbehave as much as she wants to.  And boy!  Does she want to!  Cheesy

I just had a horrid thought! She's not in cahoots with the baddies is she? Shocked Shocked Shocked Please say no, pretty please? Shocked Cry
(I shouldn't be giving your muse idea's like that! Besides I know a sweet guy that will take her! Cheesy Wink)
  

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Reply #18 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 4:37pm
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Not this time.  But who knows what she'll be up to in my next story!  Wink
  
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Reply #19 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 4:56pm
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Oh this is lovely!   mystery, sex, family, SHADO, daughters, Jackson, all mixed together.. wonderful!  Like  the build up of tension, the subtle hints, the relationship between Ed and Shannon, everything.
Perfect Denise... off to put a grandaughter to be now.. getting practise in for when 'mummy' has the next one ...8 weeks  time hopefully!
  

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Reply #20 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 5:05pm
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So happy you're enjoying this story!  I've been so excited to reach the climax but now that I'm nearing it, I'm not so sure I want the tale to end.  See how silly I am?  Cheesy
  
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Reply #21 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 6:59pm
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No  I feel exactly the same way about my stories! So glad I'm not the only one!
Possessive aren't we!  Cheesy

And it's hard when a really good story that you have enjoyed wriitng, and that has taken over your life for a while, comes to an end! Hated it when AfterMath ended!

Still, you have the writer series to continue and the Interpol series to continue!!! Yippee! Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy
  

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Reply #22 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 7:43pm
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You're right!  I do!!! Woo-hoo!  Smiley
  
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Reply #23 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 8:40pm
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denisefelt wrote on Aug 18th, 2010 at 4:37pm:
Not this time.  But who knows what she'll be up to in my next story!  Wink

Oh thank you! (whew) I had a nightmare about that! Shocked Glad it's not this story! Cheesy
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Reply #24 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 8:49pm
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Denise, you really stepped up the tension here, very nice. And Ed with Shannon is just beautiful! Smiley

Great story going here! Smiley
  

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Reply #25 - Aug 19th, 2010 at 3:00pm
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That's right Ed, you stay home and protect your lady! Make Paul earn his keep! Grin

I noticed the nightmares everytime the baddies show up, and the mention of the painting, can't wait to see that! Wink
  

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Reply #26 - Aug 19th, 2010 at 3:21pm
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Oh how lovely that Ed took Shannon to school on her first day. Ah! Sweetie ( him... not her!)
and now it all comes out... Cait, paintings, aliens... Oh dear Ed, What have you married!!!!

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Reply #27 - Aug 20th, 2010 at 11:50am
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Like this next part, the treasure box with all his secrets.. but, I got the impression from 'ABout Face'that he no longer had it,, he shook his head and smiled ruefully... implies that he regrets not having it still.  'embarrassed' might be a better word.. hinting that he still has it, somewhere. (Just me.. nit-picking as usual!) :Smiley

But it is a lovely touch Wink

And so we realise that the aliens are actually after Cait! Hah! So there Ed! Not always the primary target! Grin
  

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Reply #28 - Aug 20th, 2010 at 12:31pm
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Nice job Denise, I've heard of that paticluar gift before nice touch. So what does Cait have that the aliens want? Shocked

Moment of truth coming up! Shocked
  

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Reply #29 - Aug 20th, 2010 at 12:59pm
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Sorry to confuse you, Louise.  I would have thought being rueful was enough, myself.  As well as the dead giveaway of her comment that she wouldn't tell.  But then, I wrote it so I know what they meant.  Huh  If I can think of a way to clarify it better, I'll change it.  It's good to know when I'm being obscure!  Wink

Matt, where have you heard of this particular psychic gift?  Speaking of obscure, this one really is!  But it's also a fun one to write about!  :Smiley
  
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