Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Face Up Reply #15 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 2:15pm Print Post I'm waiting. Patiently. Okay Enough patient waiting. CHAPTER 3 NOW please!!! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #16 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 2:45pm Print Post Sorry, Louise! The Chamber of Commerce is calling! My meeting is in fifteen minutes. I'll put it up when I get back, okay? IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #17 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 3:08pm Print Post denisefelt wrote on Aug 17th, 2010 at 1:58pm:You think right, Matt! It's always fun to let her be as bad as she wants to be! Mostly I make her behave, since I have plans for her later on in a series. But in the few worlds I've created where I don't intend to marry her off to some sweet guy, I let her misbehave as much as she wants to. And boy! Does she want to! I just had a horrid thought! She's not in cahoots with the baddies is she? Please say no, pretty please? (I shouldn't be giving your muse idea's like that! Besides I know a sweet guy that will take her! ) What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #18 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 4:37pm Print Post Not this time. But who knows what she'll be up to in my next story! IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Face Up Reply #19 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 4:56pm Print Post Oh this is lovely! mystery, sex, family, SHADO, daughters, Jackson, all mixed together.. wonderful! Like the build up of tension, the subtle hints, the relationship between Ed and Shannon, everything. Perfect Denise... off to put a grandaughter to be now.. getting practise in for when 'mummy' has the next one ...8 weeks time hopefully! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #20 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 5:05pm Print Post So happy you're enjoying this story! I've been so excited to reach the climax but now that I'm nearing it, I'm not so sure I want the tale to end. See how silly I am? IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Face Up Reply #21 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 6:59pm Print Post No I feel exactly the same way about my stories! So glad I'm not the only one! Possessive aren't we! And it's hard when a really good story that you have enjoyed wriitng, and that has taken over your life for a while, comes to an end! Hated it when AfterMath ended! Still, you have the writer series to continue and the Interpol series to continue!!! Yippee! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #22 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 7:43pm Print Post You're right! I do!!! Woo-hoo! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #23 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 8:40pm Print Post denisefelt wrote on Aug 18th, 2010 at 4:37pm:Not this time. But who knows what she'll be up to in my next story! Oh thank you! (whew) I had a nightmare about that! Glad it's not this story! « Last Edit: Aug 18th, 2010 at 10:02pm by Matt » What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #24 - Aug 18th, 2010 at 8:49pm Print Post Denise, you really stepped up the tension here, very nice. And Ed with Shannon is just beautiful! Great story going here! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #25 - Aug 19th, 2010 at 3:00pm Print Post That's right Ed, you stay home and protect your lady! Make Paul earn his keep! I noticed the nightmares everytime the baddies show up, and the mention of the painting, can't wait to see that! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Face Up Reply #26 - Aug 19th, 2010 at 3:21pm Print Post Oh how lovely that Ed took Shannon to school on her first day. Ah! Sweetie ( him... not her!) and now it all comes out... Cait, paintings, aliens... Oh dear Ed, What have you married!!!! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Face Up Reply #27 - Aug 20th, 2010 at 11:50am Print Post Like this next part, the treasure box with all his secrets.. but, I got the impression from 'ABout Face'that he no longer had it,, he shook his head and smiled ruefully... implies that he regrets not having it still. 'embarrassed' might be a better word.. hinting that he still has it, somewhere. (Just me.. nit-picking as usual!) : But it is a lovely touch And so we realise that the aliens are actually after Cait! Hah! So there Ed! Not always the primary target! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Face Up Reply #28 - Aug 20th, 2010 at 12:31pm Print Post Nice job Denise, I've heard of that paticluar gift before nice touch. So what does Cait have that the aliens want? Moment of truth coming up! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Face Up Reply #29 - Aug 20th, 2010 at 12:59pm Print Post Sorry to confuse you, Louise. I would have thought being rueful was enough, myself. As well as the dead giveaway of her comment that she wouldn't tell. But then, I wrote it so I know what they meant. If I can think of a way to clarify it better, I'll change it. It's good to know when I'm being obscure! Matt, where have you heard of this particular psychic gift? Speaking of obscure, this one really is! But it's also a fun one to write about! : IP Logged