Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #75 - Aug 9th, 2010 at 10:24pm Print Post Excellent use of my motto, Matt! Isn't that phrase great? IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #76 - Aug 9th, 2010 at 10:27pm Print Post Yeah it is! Tell me if you think Jen would spill the beans or should I rethink that part? What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #77 - Aug 9th, 2010 at 10:30pm Print Post No, no! Very well done! It reads like reality. Once her friend guessed, she wouldn't deny it. Great girl talk, Matt! IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #78 - Aug 10th, 2010 at 3:50pm Print Post Chapter 7 This is great Mattt. I love the conversation betwen Matt, Ginny and Jen. Flows really well! And Jen falls for The Man eh? Hmm .. nicely done. I'll get the full review done when Glitch is completed. I need to get on with mine now don't I! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #79 - Aug 10th, 2010 at 4:04pm Print Post Well Jen is a smart lady, so I guess that was a given! Wait till you she how she handles him! : I'm almost done, I've got to finish this chapter and write the epilogue. I hope to have it done by tonight. Then I've got to edit some parts in the beginning to make the conversations easier to follow. Then I'll send it off to you! Thanks! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #80 - Aug 10th, 2010 at 8:01pm Print Post Excellent Mattt! Love the hints that Matt is going to become a more permanent feature in SHADO, and you develop his character beautifully! I like the Ed/JEn part as well! Promise of much more to come! Epilogue still to come? Oh yes... Everyone in SHADO drinks coffee? can't wait! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #81 - Aug 10th, 2010 at 9:16pm Print Post Okay chapter 7 is done and I just have to write the epilogue! Maybe later on tonight! Poor Ginny another unplanned swim, isn't Matt a brat! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #82 - Aug 11th, 2010 at 4:44am Print Post So is there any mention of what occurred at the water hole in the epilogue? (Inquiring minds want to know.) IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #83 - Aug 11th, 2010 at 4:53am Print Post Only the barest of hints! I'm working on it! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #84 - Aug 11th, 2010 at 8:29am Print Post Ah. Like it, very much Matt. Only problem is, we don't have what you would call 'swimming holes' and certainly not in very busy areas. not even many secluded beaches. I can't think of anywhere where you could find a pond to swim in.. they are all fenced off and generally you woudn't want to swim in them anyway.. usually on farms and used for water sources for cattle. I certainly wouldn't want to swim in the ponds round here! And you would probably get interrupted or arrested! Not sure if you want to change it though. But Straker could, as studio head, have acccess to a private swimming pool... maybe in a hotel, or one at a house they are using as a film location? Hotel...uses it regularly to keep fit? access to it late at night when it is closed? I do know someone who does that. Secluded old country mansion, own outdoor/indoor pool, no one around? don't know........ Just thinking... Outdoor pool..unused would be cold. and no towels etc.. Like the 'family' feel to the last bit of the chapter... Keith. etc all together.. nice touch! Looking forward to the epilogue! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #85 - Aug 11th, 2010 at 11:26am Print Post That's too bad Louise, but nowdays they are getting scarce here as well, At least where I live. I'll think that over and see what I can come up with. Denise wants the details of their little rendezvous : but that may not come out until the next story! I was supposed to write the epilogue last night but I opted to edit instead, hope to finish it this morning. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #86 - Aug 11th, 2010 at 4:46pm Print Post Yea! It's finished! Oh croap, no what do I do? Oh yeah, essay and walkthrough! I'm good! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #87 - Aug 11th, 2010 at 4:59pm Print Post That was absolutely fabulous Matt. Love the ending.. just perfect! Congratulations! a super story! (liked the discreet Ed/Jen bit... study request.. !) Stuck for something to do? wouldn't like to finish mine off for me would you? I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #88 - Aug 11th, 2010 at 5:09pm Print Post Thanks, Louise, Yeah, with Ed and Jen less was more! So what did happen on that Saturday night? Matt talked to Ed and Ginny chatted with Jen and neither one of them will say, so I guess it's left to the imagination! (Although pillow talk in a later story might reveal a few things.) What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Glitch in the Machine Matt's take Reply #89 - Aug 11th, 2010 at 5:15pm Print Post Major bonus points to Matt for being kind enough to send me the finished story complete with phrases used and where they came from added at the end! Appreciated Matt!! Damn.. I'll now have to put some phrases in my version! Rats! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
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