He's a package deal, you want him, you have to take the kids too!

You can have so much fun with amnesia stories.

Now I have to research time travel pardoxes! Gives me a headache!

I fixed the dialogue in the last post where Ginny first see's the UFO. I think this works a little better. I want the truth to be right on the edge of her memory, just out of reach!

Hopefully this works better!

Matt,
Yeah, you definitely need to add a bit to the story to show us when Ed suddenly can't sense her anymore.  It will add to the drama too! 

Also, thanks for changing her thoughts just a bit when she sees the UFO!  It reads much more believable now.  She's a scientist, so she would tend to think in terms of the physical rather than the spiritual.  That was where it wasn't working before.

I really liked the trip into town.  And when she smiles at Ben -- well, we know he's a goner for sure! 

Random Thoughts!

Virginia.... don't fall for Ben... he's a serial killer... three wives already?

but;
if you did, then you wouldn't have to do any cooking!
or probably cleaning etc

However;
no indoor plumbing
no  money,
no decent clothes


and

worst of all

no hairspray  ... how will you manage?

Getting into this story Matt.. it's taken me some time, so be patient! :

Its very interesting looking at pictures of Lady Penelope, Symphony Angel and Virginia Lake. they all have similar hairstyles.
I wonder if Sylvia Anderson had the same?

I've always been a fan of long hair on a lady, but I also liked the way Ginny's hair was done!

I've seen the website that shows all three of them, Ginny, Lady P, and Symphoney Angel!

I don't remember the site but had something to do with Symphony Angel's back story.