Neesierie Ex Member FDK Reevaluation Jun 23rd, 2010 at 12:58am Print Post Okay. Here's the spot to comment on my latest story. I hope you'll enjoy it! IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #1 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 6:51am Print Post Oh My! This is going to be fascinating!! Not sure where you're coming from, .......yet.... or where you're going to.......yet...but I'm along for the ride! Denise in writing mode again! Yippeee! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #2 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 12:32pm Print Post Remember me telling you that I once planned a whole series of Next Gen stories for the Conover Saga? Well, this is the one that's been begging me to be written ever since I finished Episode #20. Except that I didn't really think anyone would care about Straker's or Foster's kids grown up. : What do you think? Would they care? IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #3 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 2:16pm Print Post It almost looks like a crossover unless your just borrowing the Andorians! Always like the antenni on the head, kinda like pointed ears! I know that you used the Tholieans in the Chandra series, so this is interesting! That's alright I stole a species for Soul Mates. Any idea who lives in the Epsilon Endarni system? What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #4 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 3:51pm Print Post Sounds familiar, but I'd have to look it up in my ST Omnipedia to be certain. I steal most of my alien races from ST. They came up with such cool ones, after all. And I always call the aliens Thoelians, no matter what saga or story I'm writing. It's just easier if I keep a few constants, especially when I'm usually changing everything else. IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #5 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 5:07pm Print Post Right. So. Dragon.. Ed? Shelia Foster..... Paul's daughter.... Edward Carlin... Peter's son Haven't read Conover for a while so I have forgotten... Am i on the right track? And this Thoelian... Earth is his home?? This story is making me think Denise.. and I'm tired! Nice work!! Seriously nice work! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #6 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 5:24pm Print Post You make me proud, Louise! Yes, to all of the above. If you remember Chucho at all from the 16th story in the saga, it should be making you go 'hmmm' right about now. Because Tuatara is his home -- or is it? BTW, are you enjoying my emails at the start of each chapter? I stole that idea from you. IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #7 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 6:59pm Print Post I like the quiet way you are introducing various elements into this story.. the messages that Dragon hasn't deciphered, the reason why Chucho - is here , why is he almost afraid of Earth, the continuing messages Oh yes.... and the sex!!! And SHADO is still there, but, not I think, in the way it is 'now'! Very intriguing! Very compelling! Oh and I do like the emails.. nicely 'chatty' I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #8 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 9:14pm Print Post I'm going to have to read The Conover Saga I guess. Otherwise I might get lost! Very intriguing! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
dragon Ex Member Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #9 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 10:09pm Print Post I'm enjoying this thoroughly. Love the kids. LOve the subtexts. Love the overt texts. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. <g> IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #10 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 2:48pm Print Post Actually, it's been a while since I read the Conover Saga myself! Since I said the 16th story instead of the 17th! Chucho has a minor part in the beginning of #17, which is very important only if you know who he is -- which I never tell you in that story. See how I am? But you find out here -- in this story. See why this loose thread needed to be tied off? IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #11 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 3:16pm Print Post Oh boy... this is getting even more gripping!!! Dragon... of course, Chucho.. what is the matter with him.. and why is he so scared of The Man? More More More!! Don't we always say that!! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #12 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 6:33pm Print Post Chapter 5 Oh how wonderful How sad How fabulous! Nearly (just keeping them at bay) in tears here! can't wait to see how it is going to end. Louise! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #13 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 6:54pm Print Post Boy I didn't see that coming. Denise are you taking Dragon lessons? Great story. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Reevaluation Reply #14 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 7:44pm Print Post I am so so so glad this was not the end...... Just read 17 of the Conover saga.. I'll have to read them all again now!! I'd forgotten just how great they all were! Nice to meet up with old stories/friends again! I hope this ends happily! I think it will! I need some air. WWW IP Logged