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FDK Matters of the Heart
Jun 13th, 2010 at 2:49am
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Ok gang, here is the first chapter of my writer's story.
  

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Reply #1 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 3:23am
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Great start!  Beware of days with no clouds in the sky!  Wink
  
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Reply #2 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 3:09pm
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Oh yes..This is definitely going to  be interesting!  Great idea Matt! Cheesy

Looking forward to the next instalement.

Now I have to think of a writer story!! Drat! Angry
  

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Reply #3 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 3:24pm
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This one just kept screaming at me and I had to just go ahead and write it. Smiley

Blame dragon, it was her idea! She always comes up with good ones! Wink

I will get back to Lines as it is a vital piece of my saga, it just has to wait it's turn. Smiley
  

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Reply #4 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 7:58pm
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We can blame Dragon for a lot of things!!! (Only joking Dragon!! Grin)

Nice addition Matt!. I can't work out where this is going... Virginia and Matt? Hmm Wink

Look I am definitely going to have to start on a writer story, just so that I can get to grips Cheesy  with Ed!!
  

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Reply #5 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 9:29pm
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This is really lovely, Matt!  What a gentleman you are!  Ginny's impressed!  (And so are we!)  Wink  When do we get more?
  
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Reply #6 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 10:59pm
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I'm not sure how this is going to end yet! Smiley Heck I fell for her forty years ago! So my part is easy, the hard part is getting her reaction right! I'm working on more!  Wink
  

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Reply #7 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 12:04am
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Woo-hoo!  Go, Matt!  Grin
  
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Reply #8 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 5:14am
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Aaaaw!  Do brothers really talk that nice to each other?  Man, did you grow up in a different neighborhood than I did!  Cheesy  Seriously though, it was a lovely conversation.  In fact the whole chapter was great.  When can we get more?  (Yeah, I know.  I'm a broken record!)  Cool
  
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Reply #9 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 8:06am
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Chapter 1
You give us very good details for the background of this story, so it puts the reader firmly in touch with what is happening.
Poor Ginny, unloved by Ed! (at least in this story!) He only sees her as a friend. Sad
And did she have a thing for Alec as well ? Shocked

Chapter 2
This is really good conversation throughout. it is hard to write realistic conversations and harder to read conversations if they are not done well! But you succeeded with both Ginny and Matts brother.Well done!

Now I can see where this relationship is going... but what about the book and Shado? Hmmmmmmmmmm! Huh
  

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Reply #10 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 1:41pm
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Denise, Patrick and I really do have conversations like that! That made writing this so easy. I just got off the phone with him and told him about the story so he's looking forward to reading it.  Smiley

Louise, Don't worry about Ginny, she'll land on her feet! I got the Alec idea from you. Under his flirtatious exterior I always thought him to have a heart of gold. The book is going to be a secondary problem when the spinners crash the party. (A little sneek peek) Wink
  

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Reply #11 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 7:42pm
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What a lovely date!  Kiss  And Ginny all dreamy-eyed at the end!  Really sweet, Matt!  More, please!  Wink
  
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Reply #12 - Jun 15th, 2010 at 1:27am
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Leave it to The Man to worry! He's a champion at that, isn't he?  Roll Eyes  And the preflight chat was very smooth, very nice.  Keep up the good work!  Wink
  
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Reply #13 - Jun 15th, 2010 at 1:42am
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Yes he is!  Wink And I decided to let Paul grow up in this one, just to see how it would work! Smiley
  

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Reply #14 - Jun 15th, 2010 at 6:59am
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Paul married! with a baby...lovely. Just what he needs!

a very enjoyable story Matt, characters developing well, and I'm intrigued to know what is going to happen next! Wink
  

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