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FDK Reevaluation
Jun 23rd, 2010 at 12:58am
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Okay.  Here's the spot to comment on my latest story.  I hope you'll enjoy it!  Wink
  
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Re: FDK Reevaluation
Reply #1 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 6:51am
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Oh My! This is going to be fascinating!! Cheesy

Not sure where you're coming from, .......yet.... or where you're going to.......yet...but I'm along for the ride!

Denise in writing mode again! Yippeee! Grin
  

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Reply #2 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 12:32pm
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Remember me telling you that I once planned a whole series of Next Gen stories for the Conover Saga?  Well, this is the one that's been begging me to be written ever since I finished Episode #20.  Except that I didn't really think anyone would care about Straker's or Foster's kids grown up.  :Smiley

What do you think?  Would they care?  Huh
  
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Re: FDK Reevaluation
Reply #3 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 2:16pm
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It almost looks like a crossover unless your just borrowing the Andorians! Smiley Always like the antenni on the head, kinda like pointed ears! Wink

I know that you used the Tholieans in the Chandra series, so this is interesting! Wink

That's alright I stole a species for Soul Mates. Any idea who lives in the Epsilon Endarni system?  Wink Wink
  

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Reply #4 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 3:51pm
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Sounds familiar, but I'd have to look it up in my ST Omnipedia to be certain.  I steal most of my alien races from ST.  They came up with such cool ones, after all.  And I always call the aliens Thoelians, no matter what saga or story I'm writing.  It's just easier if I keep a few constants, especially when I'm usually changing everything else.  Cool
  
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Re: FDK Reevaluation
Reply #5 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 5:07pm
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Right. So. Dragon.. Ed? Shelia Foster..... Paul's daughter.... Edward Carlin... Peter's son
Haven't read Conover for a while so I have forgotten...

Am i on the right track?

And this Thoelian... Earth is his home??

This story is making me think Denise.. and I'm tired! 

Nice work!! Seriously nice work! Wink
  

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Reply #6 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 5:24pm
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You make me proud, Louise!  Yes, to all of the above.  If you remember Chucho at all from the 16th story in the saga, it should be making you go 'hmmm' right about now.  Because Tuatara is his home -- or is it? 

BTW, are you enjoying my emails at the start of each chapter?  I stole that idea from you.   Grin
  
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Re: FDK Reevaluation
Reply #7 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 6:59pm
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I like the quiet way you are introducing various elements into this story.. the messages that Dragon hasn't deciphered, the reason why Chucho - is here , why is he almost afraid of Earth, the continuing messages
Oh yes.... and the sex!!!
And SHADO is still there, but, not I think, in the way it is 'now'!
Very intriguing!
Very compelling!


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Oh and I do like the emails.. nicely 'chatty'
  

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Re: FDK Reevaluation
Reply #8 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 9:14pm
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I'm going to have to read The Conover Saga I guess. Otherwise I might get lost! Smiley

Very intriguing! Wink
  

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Reply #9 - Jun 23rd, 2010 at 10:09pm
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I'm enjoying this thoroughly. Love the kids. LOve the subtexts. Love the overt texts. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. <g>
  
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Reply #10 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 2:48pm
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Actually, it's been a while since I read the Conover Saga myself!  Since I said the 16th story instead of the 17th!  Chucho has a minor part in the beginning of #17, which is very important only if you know who he is -- which I never tell you in that story.  See how I am?  But you find out here -- in this story.  See why this loose thread needed to be tied off?  Grin
  
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Re: FDK Reevaluation
Reply #11 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 3:16pm
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Oh boy... this is getting even more gripping!!! Dragon... of course, Chucho.. what is the matter with him.. and why is he so scared of The Man?

More More More!! Grin

Don't we always say that!!
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Re: FDK Reevaluation
Reply #12 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 6:33pm
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Chapter 5
Oh how wonderful

How sad

How fabulous!

Nearly (just keeping them at bay) in tears here!

can't wait to see how it is going to end.
Louise!
  

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Re: FDK Reevaluation
Reply #13 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 6:54pm
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Boy I didn't see that coming. Denise are you taking Dragon lessons? Wink

Great story. Smiley
  

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Re: FDK Reevaluation
Reply #14 - Jun 24th, 2010 at 7:44pm
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I am so so so glad this was not the end...... Just read 17 of the Conover saga.. I'll have to read them all again now!! I'd forgotten just how great they all were!
Nice to meet up with old stories/friends again!

I hope this ends happily!

I think it will!  Wink
  

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