Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI FDK Matters of the Heart Jun 13th, 2010 at 2:49am Print Post Ok gang, here is the first chapter of my writer's story. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #1 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 3:23am Print Post Great start! Beware of days with no clouds in the sky! IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #2 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 3:09pm Print Post Oh yes..This is definitely going to be interesting! Great idea Matt! Looking forward to the next instalement. Now I have to think of a writer story!! Drat! > I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #3 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 3:24pm Print Post This one just kept screaming at me and I had to just go ahead and write it. Blame dragon, it was her idea! She always comes up with good ones! I will get back to Lines as it is a vital piece of my saga, it just has to wait it's turn. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #4 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 7:58pm Print Post We can blame Dragon for a lot of things!!! (Only joking Dragon!! ) Nice addition Matt!. I can't work out where this is going... Virginia and Matt? Hmm Look I am definitely going to have to start on a writer story, just so that I can get to grips with Ed!! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #5 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 9:29pm Print Post This is really lovely, Matt! What a gentleman you are! Ginny's impressed! (And so are we!) When do we get more? IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #6 - Jun 13th, 2010 at 10:59pm Print Post I'm not sure how this is going to end yet! Heck I fell for her forty years ago! So my part is easy, the hard part is getting her reaction right! I'm working on more! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #7 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 12:04am Print Post Woo-hoo! Go, Matt! IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #8 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 5:14am Print Post Aaaaw! Do brothers really talk that nice to each other? Man, did you grow up in a different neighborhood than I did! Seriously though, it was a lovely conversation. In fact the whole chapter was great. When can we get more? (Yeah, I know. I'm a broken record!) IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #9 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 8:06am Print Post Chapter 1 You give us very good details for the background of this story, so it puts the reader firmly in touch with what is happening. Poor Ginny, unloved by Ed! (at least in this story!) He only sees her as a friend. And did she have a thing for Alec as well ? Chapter 2 This is really good conversation throughout. it is hard to write realistic conversations and harder to read conversations if they are not done well! But you succeeded with both Ginny and Matts brother.Well done! Now I can see where this relationship is going... but what about the book and Shado? Hmmmmmmmmmm! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #10 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 1:41pm Print Post Denise, Patrick and I really do have conversations like that! That made writing this so easy. I just got off the phone with him and told him about the story so he's looking forward to reading it. Louise, Don't worry about Ginny, she'll land on her feet! I got the Alec idea from you. Under his flirtatious exterior I always thought him to have a heart of gold. The book is going to be a secondary problem when the spinners crash the party. (A little sneek peek) What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #11 - Jun 14th, 2010 at 7:42pm Print Post What a lovely date! And Ginny all dreamy-eyed at the end! Really sweet, Matt! More, please! IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #12 - Jun 15th, 2010 at 1:27am Print Post Leave it to The Man to worry! He's a champion at that, isn't he? : And the preflight chat was very smooth, very nice. Keep up the good work! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #13 - Jun 15th, 2010 at 1:42am Print Post Yes he is! And I decided to let Paul grow up in this one, just to see how it would work! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Matters of the Heart Reply #14 - Jun 15th, 2010 at 6:59am Print Post Paul married! with a baby...lovely. Just what he needs! a very enjoyable story Matt, characters developing well, and I'm intrigued to know what is going to happen next! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
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