Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI A Lonely Night Apart FDK Feb 19th, 2012 at 8:48pm Print Post One shot and done. Enjoy! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: A Lonely Night Apart FDK Reply #1 - Feb 20th, 2012 at 2:13am Print Post I had a feeling you were going to quit there. Scoundrel! Anyway, lovely look into the eve of their wedding from Straker's POV. Question: did he ever eat anything? The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: A Lonely Night Apart FDK Reply #2 - Feb 20th, 2012 at 3:44am Print Post Just like the cat interupting them before they could... What were his dreams about? I'll just let you use your imagination. To answer your question, yes, he did eat the meal that Ginny was kind enough to leave for him. After dinner, he watched the news. Isn't she a sweetheart? : What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: A Lonely Night Apart FDK Reply #3 - Feb 20th, 2012 at 2:14pm Print Post Well, I ask because in the story it isn't clear. It sounded like he was going to cook for himself then forgot about it. Did you fix that in your final draft? The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: A Lonely Night Apart FDK Reply #4 - Feb 20th, 2012 at 8:32pm Print Post I can fix it if you think it needs clarification, I was concentrating more on what he was thinking, rather than what he was doing, maybe his thoughts about Ginny's culinary talents. Yeah, that's the ticket. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
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