Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #15 - Apr 19th, 2011 at 7:04pm Print Post Thanks, Normandie! It's nice to know I'm not as predictable as I think I am sometimes. Glad you're enjoying the story. The steamy part is in the chapter I'm writing now. Ooh-la-la! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #16 - Apr 19th, 2011 at 8:27pm Print Post Neesierie wrote on Apr 19th, 2011 at 7:04pm:The steamy part is in the chapter I'm writing now. Ooh-la-la! You really have a talent for understatement Denise! : Now that was some sizzle! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #17 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:28am Print Post Thanks, Matt! All done now but the epilogue. And yes, there will be a sequel to this story. Stay tuned! The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #18 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:00pm Print Post I knew Ed would be able to handle it, but I was concerned for a moment. Very romantic story. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #19 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:12pm Print Post I will say that I was surprised to see Johnny there - at least initially. I was expecting the aliens, though, seeing as they're never far from Ed's consciousness. So, we'll see the next part soon? And Miss Ealand calling the hospital on Straker - Oh boy... If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #20 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:39pm Print Post Hmmm. My beta tester didn't get the reference either. I think I'm going to have to go back and change that line to read: "His secretary, being no fool, immediately got on the phone to Col. Freeman at the hospital." I guess I can understand the reader forgetting. That was one story ago, after all (even though it's only been a few days in Earth time.) The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 658 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #21 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 4:54pm Print Post You're right - I forgot that Freeman was at the hospital. If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #22 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 8:39pm Print Post Well, I was wrong about the epilogue. It wanted to be another chapter. But at least the story is done! For now. I have BIG plans for the 3rd installment! *snicker* The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #23 - Apr 20th, 2011 at 11:40pm Print Post Liked the new chapter Denise, I noticed the titile you liked in it. I was surprised at the regs against the C in C marrying, that's a departure from your normal MO. But this is another place and time. : What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #24 - Apr 21st, 2011 at 2:15pm Print Post Actually, Matt, I've had him unable to marry a civilian before. So. What do you think about where this series is headed? The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #25 - Apr 21st, 2011 at 9:48pm Print Post That's right you have, I forgot that Trishia was already military and Straker gave Jackson an ultimatum with Cait. I like where this is going. Careful this may turn into a saga! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
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