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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Over the Next Hill -- FDK Apr 16^th, 2011 at 5:14am	Print Post
	This is the second story in my Uphoria series. I'm still researching it, so I can't guarantee how quickly I will finish it. But it seems to want to be written now, so here we go!

	The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars.
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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #1 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 3:07pm	Print Post
	Uphoria seems awfully familiar, like I might have read about it somewhere else. very big grin I like this Denise, Ed is a much different person when he is relaxed. Do you not agree?

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Normandie Captain Offline UFO Rocks! Posts: 132 Location: In the veg patch...	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #2 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 3:11pm	Print Post
	Great opening - I like this universe. A good read for a far-too-hot Saturday afternoon while I eat an ice cream (well, eat the second half - Deborah's Dragon instalment got the first half). I know you said you're still researching but as a beek(eeper) I know that honey bees aren't crazy about chrysanthemums and tulips really deliver pollen rather than nectar. Really happy bees like nectar which is what they use to make the honey. Pollen is stored too but is fed mostly to the larvae. Bees would thank you for, say, a range of herbs - rosemary, sage, lemon balm, thymes and the lavenders, for eg. Whether a sudden growth of those fits the situation, though, I don't know. Also, just an fyi, bees are rarely seen on red flowers - because red isn't in the colour spectrum they can see. And there are plenty of other bees that you may see on flowers but they aren't necessarily honey bees and they aren't, therefore, necessarily living in a hive or producing honey. Some links that might prompt some ideas... http://www.thedailygreen.com/going-green/tips/bee-friendly-plants http://www.themelissagarden.com/TMG_Vetaley031608.htm Obviously, feel free to disregard the above if it doesn't suit your purposes. It is a different universe, after all.


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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #3 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 4:07pm	Print Post
	Thanks, Normandie! I checked it out and will change it in the story. It just goes to show that you never know what might need researching! I found a few flowers the bees will like, so I'll switch it in the original. I don't usually change my drafts on the forums, because that's time-consuming. When the final draft goes online, the changes can be seen then. Thanks for the heads-up! I appreciate the feedback!

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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #4 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 4:16pm	Print Post
	Matt wrote on Apr 16^th, 2011 at 3:07pm: Uphoria seems awfully familiar, like I might have read about it somewhere else. very big grin Oh? Where else? I stole it from ST's episode "Shore Leave." What are you referring to?

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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #5 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 4:33pm	Print Post
	Sounded like heaven to me, less the gold streets.

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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #6 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 5:26pm	Print Post
	Oh, wow! No, I was thinking of something much more mundane. I've always liked the idea of a planet that gave you whatever you wanted from "Shore Leave" in ST:TOS. And I didn't think they gave it the chance to show what it might be like to actually live in a place like that. So I started thinking about what I would do if I lived there. It pleased me to realize that not much of my present life would change. What I value most would remain the same even in a place where I could have anything.

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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #7 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 5:30pm	Print Post
	The most important things can't be bought, at any price.

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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #8 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 5:45pm	Print Post
	Matt wrote on Apr 16^th, 2011 at 5:30pm: The most important things can't be bought, at any price. Exactly.

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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #9 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 7:38pm	Print Post
	Interesting place, I wonder who that was behind the tree? :

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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #10 - Apr 16^th, 2011 at 11:45pm	Print Post
	Who knows?

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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #11 - Apr 18^th, 2011 at 11:51pm	Print Post
	I have an idea, I'll let you know if I was right.

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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #12 - Apr 19^th, 2011 at 4:20pm	Print Post
	I was right! Great Chapter Denise!

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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #13 - Apr 19^th, 2011 at 4:30pm	Print Post
	I hoped it would be obvious who it was. But even my beta tester wasn't sure.

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Normandie Captain Offline UFO Rocks! Posts: 132 Location: In the veg patch...	Re: Over the Next Hill -- FDK Reply #14 - Apr 19^th, 2011 at 5:25pm	Print Post
	Well, it wasn't obvious to me. But I can be remarkably dim. Great chapter, Denise.


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