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Write Rat Major SHADO Research Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States	The Rabbit's Paw comments Apr 5^th, 2011 at 3:25am	Print Post
	This is a story idea I've had in my head for a while, and something of a tribute to Denise's A Little Magic, which is not only my favorite of all her stories, it's one I envy. This was the plot bunny I caught earlier and when I got home after going to you know where, I knew how I wanted it to go. Not sure when I can finish this. I don't see this being a long story. This is gloriously NOT canon.


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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #1 - Apr 5^th, 2011 at 3:36am	Print Post
	And that is just about what it would take to get Ed on vacation! He can be quite stubborn when he wants to be!

	What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #2 - Apr 5^th, 2011 at 3:39am	Print Post
	I must admit, I'm intrigued.

	The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars.
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Blue Shrew Lieutenant Offline Did I wake you, Alec? Posts: 55 Location: Alec's Bedroom	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #3 - Apr 6^th, 2011 at 4:39am	Print Post
	Tis a great start. Loved Alec, the part where he sits at the desk with that wicked grin Hee Hee. Straker at DisneyLand


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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #4 - Apr 6^th, 2011 at 1:33pm	Print Post
	Oh, God! Jetlag! Nothing's worse -- even torture! You described it so well that I need a nap now. And I just got up!

	The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars.
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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #5 - Apr 6^th, 2011 at 3:30pm	Print Post
	Poor Ed, at the mercy of the bell boy! Love it!

	What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
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Write Rat Major Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #6 - Apr 6^th, 2011 at 10:15pm	Print Post
	This is just a first draft of Paw. Sigh, this is another example of me creating a minor character who is too much fun to just let go. Peter is driving Ed nuts, yes. However, Peter is a very decent young man, very honest, caring and he now feels connected and obligated to Straker. Remember that. I did have reservations (no pun intended) about putting Straker on Pan-Am, did the airline already fold in 1980? If it did, it's easy to change it. I'm leaving the bad airline food in. Ordinarily, Straker would have realized his suitcase would have been securily locked by Alec. So he'd know the suitcase had been switched or stolen or lost when it opened so easily. (There go his Nehru suits) Since Straker is dealing with terminal (I swear I'm not consciously making these puns up) jet lag, he didn't think about that when he opens it. He's as badly stressed out as Alec says he is to be making mistakes of that nature. Ed Straker's problems continue. For one thing, well- Quote: Poor Ed, at the mercy of the bell boy! So it seems. Quote: Oh, God! Jetlag! Nothing's worse -- even torture! Denise, I've never had jet lag, but I've gone without sleep. I concur! Quote: Loved Alec, the part where he sits at the desk with that wicked grin Hee Hee Alec's enjoying success now, but when Straker gets back.....IF he gets back


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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #7 - Apr 6^th, 2011 at 10:21pm	Print Post
	I liked Peter! He most certainly seemed like a decent chap.

	What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #8 - Apr 8^th, 2011 at 1:49am	Print Post
	In knew I liked Peter for some reason! And love Ed's thoughts about how Ginny would react to being thought of as just a housewife! Nuke!

	What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #9 - Apr 8^th, 2011 at 2:13am	Print Post
	The modeling world definitely collides with the acting world in many areas. Are you sure she wouldn't have recognized him when he opened the door? I like Peter.

	The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars.
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Blue Shrew Lieutenant Offline Did I wake you, Alec? Posts: 55 Location: Alec's Bedroom	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #10 - Apr 8^th, 2011 at 6:23am	Print Post
	Chapter OUT Quote: If she tries to leave, smite her with the Gideon Bible or something hard. If you kill her, I'll provide you with an alibi. That brought tears to my eyes as I laughed so hard. Gideon Bible abuse :


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Write Rat Major Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #11 - Apr 8^th, 2011 at 8:49am	Print Post
	Quote: Are you sure she wouldn't have recognized him when he opened the door? Another top model, even an American one, certainly might, but remember, she says this about Straker. You're short, but reasonably good looking, I suppose. What do you think of her observation of the Man? She's a taco short of a mexican dinner, she inhabits a universe of one. Her. From the get go, she insults Straker. A jetlagged Straker. Then she assumes because he doesn't melt before her loveliness, that he's gay, but that's not enough, she twists his sleeve spitefully. Had Alec been there, he would have bought popcorn and watched from a safe distance.


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Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 657 Location: Washington (not DC)	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #12 - Apr 8^th, 2011 at 1:46pm	Print Post
	Quote: Had Alec been there, he would have bought popcorn and watched from a safe distance. Nah, Alec would have started the paperwork to cover her death. A line my DH uses which you are all free to borrow: "I'd kill you but you're not worth the paperwork."

	If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying.
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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #13 - Apr 8^th, 2011 at 1:51pm	Print Post
	And there is a lot of paperwork!

	What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: The Rabbit's Paw comments Reply #14 - Apr 8^th, 2011 at 3:56pm	Print Post
	Librarian wrote on Apr 8^th, 2011 at 1:46pm: A line my DH uses which you are all free to borrow: "I'd kill you but you're not worth the paperwork." OMG! Yes, I will definitely use that one -- not in a story, but in real life!

	The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars.
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