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Write Rat Major SHADO Research Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #15 - Apr 6^th, 2011 at 10:22pm	Print Post
	Matt wrote on Apr 6^th, 2011 at 3:40pm: Aw, Ed had a pet mouse, very nice. And the end of the chapter was an interesting twist, I shouldn't have been surprised, even though I was. : I think my and Denise's universes collided, Alec the mouse escaped from The Island. I loved it, Denise! Mice are actually very tame like that, too, excellent. I raised mice for about a year, and rats for about 13 years. Before I forget, oh you HAVE to submit that photograph to some magazine, of your grandkids, Denise. Nans reads Woman's World, that might be one to submit it in. That photograph is so wonderful. Oh! I just caught a topic bunny!


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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #16 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 12:38am	Print Post
	It's from a shoot I did last spring with my granddaughters. I have the loveliest pics of them as fairies from that day! I made them a hardbound fairy poetry book (complete with fairy poems from Nana and Mommy) and a calendar for their wall. It's been great!

	The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars.
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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #17 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 12:40am	Print Post
	The story is done. It's shorter than my usual fare, but it turned out very fun! Thanks for the challenge, Deb! I will post the rest as soon as my beta tester recovers from her total shock at the ending and gives me the final thumbs up!

	The sky is not the limit; nor are the stars.
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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #18 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 12:47am	Print Post
	Short is not a bad thing, looking forward to it!

	What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #19 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 4:17am	Print Post
	Now I know why I liked your monster! Good Job!

	What do you mean, we're out of coffee!
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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #20 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 4:21am	Print Post
	You might want to read the epilogue before you decide how good a job I did!

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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #21 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 4:22am	Print Post
	Woo Hoo! That's a first for you right?

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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #22 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 4:29am	Print Post
	Well, I can't do the sort of bizarre stuff other (nameless) writers have done with interspecies sex, since I'm boring and pedestrian really and like to stick with human vs. human for the most part. But yes, technically this is my first interspecies sex scene. My daughter about fell over! She definitely wasn't expecting it to end like that! She still hasn't given me her final okay, but since I just adore the story the way it is, I put it up anyway. If there are any glaring points I've left out, she'll let me know tomorrow and I'll fix it before it goes up on my website.

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Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #23 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 4:32am	Print Post
	Quite frankly I didn't expect it eithier, but maybe I should have! snicker Great story Denise. I enjoyed it.

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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #24 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 4:34am	Print Post
	Well, I've never paired Straker with such a dynamic character before, so it really surprised my daughter when she just sorta -- you know -- took charge! But I found it hilarious myself. Poor Edward! snicker Seduced in spite of himself. tsktsk* Thanks, Deb! This was such a fun challenge!

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Write Rat Major Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #25 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 7:09am	Print Post
	Quote: “We can be,” was the calm answer. “Are there chimeras on this world? I have not scented any.” “Oh. Well, no, they’re not real. They’re a myth. You know, legends.” So this being is standing in front of him and he's saying they're a myth. Quote: For real?” he squealed. “Oh, man! I would so love that!” Then he deflated. “But I can’t. I don’t have a passport. And a flight there costs lots of money. I know, because I looked it up once when I thought I might visit Billy.” Hasn't this boy's mother told him not to go off with mythological strangers? Quote: A mouse?” Freeman squeaked, jumping up from his chair. “Where?” I find it difficult to believe Alec would be afraid of a mouse. Let me think this over. Straker doesn't generally scare him but a mouse does? Quote: He smiled wryly at it, then made a discovery. “Oh! Sorry, Xen. I didn’t realize that you were a lady mouse.” Straker has sharp eyes. Actually you sex a mouse from the distance of its..oh, never mind. Straker having had one as a pet would no doubt have had a Guide to Mousekeeping, and know the differences between the sexes. With rats, it's extremely easy. I loved this story. In this story, your Straker is fairly close to my usual Straker. I really enjoyed this, especially Straker making Alec's life hell as usual. Denise, you've had tea with Sir Perry in the Between, haven't you? Just let me say that the ending is additionally risque because it leaves their alliance up to the imagination. Yet it still is suggestive enough. I very much liked how you handled it, and aren't the best stories ones in which the characters take over? There's going to be a definite spring in Straker's step when he reports back to SHADO the next day


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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #26 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 11:42am	Print Post
	Actually, the whole Alec being afraid of mice came out of the blue. Ford mentioned mouse and he jumped! But I think it holds okay with the storyline. We all have our own little phobias, after all. I guess (for this universe at least) mice are one of Alec's. I've held mice before and not been able to tell their sex without checking, so I assumed that was normal. Is there a trick to it then? This story could never be released into the public domain. They'd never know how to classify it. In many ways, it's a kid story about a few intrepid boys. But in other ways, it's a horror story, complete with an alarming monster. And then there's the ending (and the office scene, if you want to get technical!) Sooo naughty! So, the story ends up being as much a chimera as Xen!!!

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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #27 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 11:45am	Print Post
	Oh, hey! I forgot to ask. Can I add a dedication to you on this story? You are the original white mouse that inspired certain scenes, after all. So glad you liked the story!

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Neesierie Colonel Offline Straker, somehow it's always about you. Posts: 990 Location: Fulton, MO	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #28 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 3:12pm	Print Post
	I just reread the story and found that Straker had noticed that she was a female mouse the first time he held her. Hmmm. How did I forget that? So I changed the rest and that should take care of any issues with regard to guessing sex on a mouse. Thanks for the info about it, though. It's not something I would have considered researching. :

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Write Rat Major Offline Straker and his coffee. Posts: 356 Location: United States	Re: All's Fair FDK Reply #29 - Apr 7^th, 2011 at 4:10pm	Print Post
	I'd enjoy a story dedicated to me, Denise.


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