Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: AfterMath....Help! May 30th, 2010 at 3:53pm Print Post No don't scrap it! Please No!!! Maybe a combination of diary entries and third person. I really like what you've done so far, and the diary entries can ad a whole new dimension to the story! You have a great story going here. Go ahead and write the diary entries and when they are done see how it can all piece together with diologue and narrative. I hope this helps. Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: AfterMath....Help! Reply #1 - May 30th, 2010 at 4:29pm Print Post My luck if I had a brain transplant, Jackson would be doing it! He would enjoy that way too much! Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
dragon Ex Member Re: AfterMath....Help! Reply #2 - May 30th, 2010 at 5:37pm Print Post LOL. actually, the only brain transplant I'd consider is mine going into a cloned body. I have no intention of ending up as someone else. Think of all the problems it would cause .. LOL IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: AfterMath....Help! Reply #3 - May 30th, 2010 at 5:54pm Print Post Good point dragon. I don't need the body transplant (yet) but it would be nice to shed about thirty pounds! I was as thin as a rail until I hit 33, and then the scale has continued a slow but steady increase! Oh well at least I still have all my hair! Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: AfterMath....Help! Reply #4 - May 31st, 2010 at 1:09am Print Post Listen, guys! You're supposed to be sci-fi buffs. And any smart sci-fi buff knows that brain transplants always go wrong! HOW many cheesy movies have been made about this? Louise, my advice is to keep the brain you have, and just give it a rest. Follow Matt's advice and let the story do what it wants. When it's done, you can patch it together to make a memorable story that none of us will ever forget. OK? Yours, Denise IP Logged