Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI FDK Best Friends May 29th, 2010 at 9:19pm Print Post I've finished up to chapter 3 and I'm about halfway through chapter 4. I'll post more as I finish it. Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #1 - May 30th, 2010 at 3:41pm Print Post Chapter 3; Poseidon. sounds interesting! Liked the references to Subsmash , and Paul Foster's one track mind..That's our Paul all right! Chapter 4a... Nice!! Always good to see a woman thrashing a guy! (even if it is in a flight simulator!) More please! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #2 - May 30th, 2010 at 4:02pm Print Post Project Poseidon is the DSV project referred to in Soul Mates. At the time I didn't have a name for it But I can always add it in chapter 13. I really enjoyed the guys vs the gals in that scene and it was fun developing Gay's character transforming her into the confident Skydiver Captain depected in Soul Mates! By the end of this story she will be walking with her head held very high! And Peter Carlin is no slouch eithier That mad it even more fun! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #3 - May 30th, 2010 at 6:40pm Print Post Hey gang, Chapter 4 is finished. Rather than make a 4 B I just pasted it into the exsisting text. On to Chapter five with spinners abound! Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #4 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 12:08am Print Post Very suspenseful beginning to chapter 5! So sad about the interceptor pilot! Leaving a family behind. But so very brave of him as well. I enjoyed Alec's cute line at the end. Straker -- human? Never say so! More, please! Denise IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #5 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 1:10pm Print Post I enjoyed the whole 'subplot ' about Martin. Very nice work. Like the way this is working out Matt. VEry enjoyable read! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #6 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 5:42pm Print Post Okay gang, here is the last part of chapter 5. I just have to write the epilogue! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #7 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 8:01pm Print Post Great story, Matt! Yea for Gay! Can't wait to read the epilogue! Denise (squirming in her chair, trying to be patient) IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #8 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 8:08pm Print Post I fully agree with Denise, Matt. A great story! Hurry up with the epilogue!! I'm looking forward to reading the entire story! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #9 - Jun 3rd, 2010 at 7:33pm Print Post Ladies, just ask and you shall receive! It's done and I hope it was worth the wait. I would have had it done last night but Sue wanted cuddle time! Got to keep the home fires burning! I haven't done much editing on this so if you see something that doesn't look right, let me know. Thanks, Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #10 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 12:14am Print Post Matt, What an enjoyable story! It surprises me that a man was able to write a girl's friend story. And I don't mean that in a sexist way. I mean that we write what we know, and well . . . But you got it down very true to life. Thanks for a wonderful read! (And I never doubted that it was about the coffee!) I learned that one from Nora Roberts! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Best Friends Reply #11 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 1:47am Print Post Thanks Denise, I do listen to my wife about certain things, even though she might tell you otherwise! I guess I had a good handle on Ginny's and Gay's personality. I'm not sure if I could do the same with Nina or Joan. I glad you enjoyed it! It was fun doing back story work and I have two more planned. I think you're going to like Absense as it focuses mostly on Ed and him supressing his feelings. We get to meet his father (my take) as well! It should be fun. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
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