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May 29th, 2010 at 9:19pm
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I've finished up to chapter 3 and I'm about halfway through chapter 4. I'll post more as I finish it.

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Reply #1 - May 30th, 2010 at 3:41pm
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Chapter 3;
Poseidon. sounds interesting! Liked the references to Subsmash , and Paul Foster's one track mind..That's our Paul all right!

Chapter 4a... Nice!!  Always good to see a woman thrashing a guy! (even if it is in a flight simulator!)
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Reply #2 - May 30th, 2010 at 4:02pm
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Project Poseidon is the DSV project referred to in Soul Mates. At the time I didn't have a name for it But I can always add it in chapter 13.

I really enjoyed the guys vs the gals in that scene and it was fun developing Gay's character transforming her into the confident Skydiver Captain depected in Soul Mates! By the end of this story she will be walking with her head held very high!  Cool

And Peter Carlin is no slouch eithier That mad it even more fun!  Smiley
  

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Reply #3 - May 30th, 2010 at 6:40pm
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Hey gang,

Chapter 4 is finished. Rather than make a 4 B I just pasted it into the exsisting text.

On to Chapter five with spinners abound!

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Reply #4 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 12:08am
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Very suspenseful beginning to chapter 5!  So sad about the interceptor pilot!  Cry  Leaving a family behind.  But so very brave of him as well.  I enjoyed Alec's cute line at the end.  Straker -- human?  Never say so!  Shocked

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Reply #5 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 1:10pm
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I enjoyed the whole 'subplot ' about Martin. Very nice work.  Like the way this is working out Matt. VEry enjoyable read! Smiley
  

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Reply #6 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 5:42pm
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Okay gang, here is the last part of chapter 5. I just have to write the epilogue! Smiley
  

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Reply #7 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 8:01pm
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Great story, Matt!  Yea for Gay!  Grin  Can't wait to read the epilogue!

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Reply #8 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 8:08pm
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I fully agree with Denise, Matt.  A great story! Hurry up with the epilogue!!  I'm looking forward to reading the entire story!
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Reply #9 - Jun 3rd, 2010 at 7:33pm
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Ladies, just ask and you shall receive! It's done and I hope it was worth the wait.  Smiley

I would have had it done last night but Sue wanted cuddle time! Got to keep the home fires burning!  Wink

I haven't done much editing on this so if you see something that doesn't look right, let me know.

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Reply #10 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 12:14am
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Matt,
What an enjoyable story!  It surprises me that a man was able to write a girl's friend story.  And I don't mean that in a sexist way.  I mean that we write what we know, and well . . .  :Smiley  But you got it down very true to life.  Thanks for a wonderful read!

(And I never doubted that it was about the coffee!)  I learned that one from Nora Roberts!
  
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Reply #11 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 1:47am
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Thanks Denise, I do listen to my wife about certain things, even though she might tell you otherwise! Grin

I guess I had a good handle on Ginny's and Gay's personality. I'm not sure if I could do the same with Nina or Joan.  Smiley

I glad you enjoyed it! It was fun doing back story work and I have two more planned. I think you're going to like Absense as it focuses mostly on Ed and him supressing his feelings. We get to meet his father (my take) as well! It should be fun.  Smiley
  

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