That was pretty good up to the part where Straker comes in. A nehru doth not make Straker. He was too damn soft. Obviously I'm biased as hell, and anyone making an effort to do it with new technology (which is why I do my stuff present day, give Straker an secure smartphone and ipod for pity's sake  ) and do it well is a plus, but meh   My Straker is changed by time and experience, but his core is steel.
Amelia