Lee Homer Lieutenant Offline Long Live UFO Posts: 62 Location: United Kindom Re: FDK The Search Apr 25th, 2011 at 7:50pm Print Post This is my second fic that takes place after "The Hot Seat." It's part of my imagined second season of UFO and I would call it Episode 2 If Sky One was real....I'd be flying it right about now IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK The Search Reply #1 - Apr 25th, 2011 at 10:10pm Print Post Good start, it was interesting to see two different views on how an interceptor crash would be handled, both your's and Claire's. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Librarian IAC Member Offline I may be blonde but... Posts: 657 Location: Washington (not DC) Re: FDK The Search Reply #2 - Apr 27th, 2011 at 2:34pm Print Post Straker's gonna' hate you guys - two interceptor crashes in the same week. Henderson's going to have kittens. Excellent start. If you only have one solution to a problem - you're not trying. IP Logged
Lee Homer Lieutenant Offline Long Live UFO Posts: 62 Location: United Kindom Re: FDK The Search Reply #3 - Apr 27th, 2011 at 8:23pm Print Post Hey people. Matt has kindly pointed out an error in Chapter 1 regaurding the Interceptor crash. I'm going to try and attempt to explain it in Chapter 3 but if not, then I'm going to have to re-do the whole paragraph. Any tips on how to improve the small error would be kindly appreciated. If Sky One was real....I'd be flying it right about now IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK The Search Reply #4 - Apr 27th, 2011 at 8:49pm Print Post Hey Lee, It was a question, more than anything else, not an error. The scene stands well as is, although I did send you a couple of ideas. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lee Homer Lieutenant Offline Long Live UFO Posts: 62 Location: United Kindom Re: FDK The Search Reply #5 - Apr 27th, 2011 at 9:24pm Print Post Thanks for the tips. I justed wanted to use that idea for a while. Anyway, Chapter three will be up soon If Sky One was real....I'd be flying it right about now IP Logged
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