Kira-kun Ex Member Re: Love Never Fails FDK Oct 22nd, 2010 at 6:29pm Print Post Might want to check for passive constructions, I found several that could be strengthened by removing "had been" etc. Interesting beginning. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Love Never Fails FDK Reply #1 - Feb 17th, 2011 at 2:07am Print Post Okay, this one is back up. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged