Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI FDK Soul Mates Jun 4th, 2010 at 12:53am Print Post Here is the comment thread for Soul Mates. I'll be posting this a little at a time. Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #1 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 2:59am Print Post That's some prologue! I don't remember reading that before. Quite a powerful way to start a story! Wow! One little quibble, if I may. You used 'personal' instead of 'personnel' more than once. Just FYI. Thanks for posting the story here, so that we can enjoy it in serial fashion! It makes it a lot easier to keep up on my UFO reading if I only have a chapter or two from each story to read each day! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #2 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 12:35pm Print Post Thanks Denise, I'll fix that! It's little things like that I seem to miss! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #3 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 3:46pm Print Post It's an easy mistake to make. Happy to help! What a lovely story this is turning out to be! I thoroughly enjoyed their date in the small plane! There's just something so romantic about flying a prop plane together . . . : Even when the date gets crashed by greenies! IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #4 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 8:56pm Print Post I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll tell you the parts I liked the best as you get into it further. The prologue was one my favorite action/suspense scenes. Yes thoses damn greenies, always causing trouble! > Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #5 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 9:04pm Print Post Well, the prologue was also extremely suspenseful and well-written too! That never hurts. IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #6 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 10:03pm Print Post Very nice segue from Timelash to Mindbender! Lots of action and playful banter! And you even noted the coffee stealing bit! Loved that! This is a great story, Matt! More, please? IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #7 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 1:07am Print Post The coffee stealing bit was my biggest reason for including the episode snippets. There was certainly some romantic interplay going on there! It just fit so well! I posted chapter 5, it has one of my very favorite scenes! Can you guess which one it is? : Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #8 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 2:55am Print Post Loved chapter 5! *gusty sigh* Thanks, Matt. It's so nice to have other writers doing romantic scenes too! And the surprises about Ginny's parents -- oh, my! I can't wait for more! IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #9 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 4:11am Print Post I must say, I'm liking the sound of her mother! We do get to be a little mouse under the table when they have dinner, don't we? Pretty please? IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #10 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 4:16am Print Post You're really going to like the next chapter, if you like Lynn! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK Soul Mates Reply #11 - Jun 27th, 2010 at 6:05am Print Post Okay gang, I've started posting the rest of this but I'm going to be breaking up the story into smaller sections, three maybe four smaller stoies. I have a good idea where to break the first section, but the second, third and maybe forth is the question. I'll get it posted up and get some input then. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
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