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FDK Soul Mates
Jun 4th, 2010 at 12:53am
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Here is the comment thread for Soul Mates. I'll be posting this a little at a time. Smiley

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Reply #1 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 2:59am
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That's some prologue!  I don't remember reading that before.  Quite a powerful way to start a story! Wow!  Cool

One little quibble, if I may.  You used 'personal' instead of 'personnel' more than once.  Just FYI.  Wink

Thanks for posting the story here, so that we can enjoy it in serial fashion!  It makes it a lot easier to keep up on my UFO reading if I only have a chapter or two from each story to read each day!  Smiley
  
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Reply #2 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 12:35pm
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Thanks Denise, I'll fix that! It's little things like that I seem to miss!  Smiley
  

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Reply #3 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 3:46pm
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It's an easy mistake to make.  Happy to help!  Smiley 

What a lovely story this is turning out to be!  I thoroughly enjoyed their date in the small plane!  There's just something so romantic about flying a prop plane together . . .  Roll Eyes  Even when the date gets crashed by greenies!
  
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Reply #4 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 8:56pm
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I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Smiley I'll tell you the parts I liked the best as you get into it further. The prologue was one my favorite action/suspense scenes. Wink

Yes thoses damn greenies, always causing trouble! >Sad

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Reply #5 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 9:04pm
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Well, the prologue was also extremely suspenseful and well-written too!  That never hurts.  Wink
  
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Reply #6 - Jun 4th, 2010 at 10:03pm
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Very nice segue from Timelash to Mindbender!  Lots of action and playful banter!  And you even noted the coffee stealing bit!  Loved that!  Wink  This is a great story, Matt!  More, please?
  
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Reply #7 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 1:07am
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The coffee stealing bit was my biggest reason for including the episode snippets.  Wink There was certainly some romantic interplay going on there! It just fit so well! Smiley

I posted chapter 5, it has one of my very favorite scenes! Can you guess which one it is?  :Smiley

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Reply #8 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 2:55am
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Loved chapter 5!  *gusty sigh*  Thanks, Matt.  It's so nice to have other writers doing romantic scenes too!  Wink  And the surprises about Ginny's parents -- oh, my!   Shocked  I can't wait for more!
  
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Reply #9 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 4:11am
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I must say, I'm liking the sound of her mother!  We do get to be a little mouse under the table when they have dinner, don't we?  Roll Eyes  Pretty please?
  
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Reply #10 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 4:16am
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You're really going to like the next chapter, if you like Lynn! Smiley
  

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Re: FDK Soul Mates
Reply #11 - Jun 27th, 2010 at 6:05am
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Okay gang, I've started posting the rest of this but I'm going to be breaking up the story into smaller sections, three maybe four smaller stoies. Smiley

I have a good idea where to break the first section, but the second, third and maybe forth is the question. I'll get it posted up and get some input then. Wink
  

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