Neesierie Ex Member FDK - Devilsgate #5 May 28th, 2010 at 9:44pm Print Post Louise says that my current un-title sounds like a bus! Sorry, but the proper title hasn't come to me yet! When it does, you guys will be the first to know! This story promises to have two weddings in it, so I guess I'd better get writing! Wouldn't want the readers to miss out on those, now would we? Yours, Denise IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #1 - May 28th, 2010 at 10:01pm Print Post Two weddings! I guess I'd better get my swoon meter fixed! Louise broke it during the pond scene. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #2 - May 29th, 2010 at 8:44am Print Post Next stop. Devilsgate. All passengers for Harlington, the Studio complex and the secret underground headquarters, please alight at the pond. This service terminates at Claringbold Manor. WOuld passengers please remove any drool before disembarking. Thankyou for travelling with National Express. (sorry.. I just had to do that.....) Alec is getting a bit .... well he's getting quite a bit isn't he, in this story! I want to read more! More!!!! You need to have a scene at the beach Denise.. Time and Tide? snigger snigger I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #3 - May 29th, 2010 at 1:47pm Print Post Yes, tissuses are available before you get off the bus! Too funny Louise! What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #4 - Jun 1st, 2010 at 8:58pm Print Post NIce title Denise, I'm thinking circles as in wedding rings! And mabye other hidden meanings. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #5 - Jun 1st, 2010 at 9:09pm Print Post Exactly! Thanks for sending my mind down that road with your suggestions! Appreciate it! Actually, lots of interlocking circles in this one. So this title may last through the final draft!!! (Not all of them do.) Yours, Denise IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #6 - Jun 1st, 2010 at 9:17pm Print Post I'm glad I could help, I was about one third of the way through Soul Mates before the title hit me. Every other story I've done (or planned) I had the title first! Go figure! Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #7 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 10:53am Print Post Oh Globbetts! I read your dedication... I think I shall have to write another Colonel Felt story now and get her married off to a certain Man! Fair's fair after all! Really enjoying this story... but I enjoy them ALL! Only problem is |I have LOADS to read/review every morniing, adn trying to catch up is a nightmare! LtCdr! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #8 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 2:30pm Print Post I know, but isn't it lovely to see everyone being so productive? I'm glad you liked the dedication. It's not necessary to reciprocate. It was enough to get my very own sex scene! Made my day! *giggle* IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #9 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 3:01pm Print Post Yes, but Denise is such fun to write about! Looking forward to the weddings! - especially mine! Do I get a honeymoon???? I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #10 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 3:11pm Print Post You're supposed to, but it may get cancelled -- or at least delayed. Haven't decided yet. I guess you'll know when I do! : Denise IP Logged
Neesierie Ex Member Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #11 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 3:14am Print Post Oops! I just realized that in the time between writing chapter 1 and 2, I somehow replaced Ayshea at radar with Keith! Guess I need to fix that one. Well, there were extenuating circumstances, after all. I was in Respitio for a few days. IP Logged
Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #12 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 3:17am Print Post Outstanding Denise, I'm going to have to sharpen my pencil for a proper review! Plus I get to re read the story! Matt What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #13 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 10:19am Print Post This is great Denise! reallly enjoy the interplay between Jake and Ginny! ... and Ed stilll missing Alec... WHere is alec by the way?? Looking forward to getting married tomorrow! I need some air. WWW IP Logged
Lightcudder Colonel Offline Trust no one. Posts: 1311 Location: Here. When you least expect it Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5 Reply #14 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 7:36pm Print Post Oh how lovely...Keith getting a promotion..and about time too. Very nice! And teh part about them betting on how long it would be befoe he gets bored is SUPER! VEry true as well! Loed the way Jake handles Paul....... and Ginny and Jake . Such a good couple . But I thought i was getting married? has my groom changed his mind? I need some air. WWW IP Logged
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