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FDK - Devilsgate #5
May 28th, 2010 at 9:44pm
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Louise says that my current un-title sounds like a bus!  Sorry, but the proper title hasn't come to me yet!  When it does, you guys will be the first to know!   Smiley

This story promises to have two weddings in it, so I guess I'd better get writing!  Wouldn't want the readers to miss out on those, now would we?
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Re: FDK - Devilsgate #5
Reply #1 - May 28th, 2010 at 10:01pm
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Two weddings! I guess I'd better get my swoon meter fixed!  Smiley Louise broke it during the pond scene.  Wink
  

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Reply #2 - May 29th, 2010 at 8:44am
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Next stop. Devilsgate. All passengers for Harlington, the Studio complex and the secret underground headquarters, please alight at the pond. 
This service terminates at Claringbold Manor. WOuld passengers please remove any drool before disembarking.

Thankyou for travelling with National Express.

(sorry.. I just had to do that.....) Wink Grin

Alec is getting a bit .... well he's getting quite a bit isn't he, in this story! I want to read more!  More!!!!

You need to have a scene at the beach Denise.. Time and Tide?  snigger snigger
  

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Reply #3 - May 29th, 2010 at 1:47pm
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Yes, tissuses are available before you get off the bus!  Smiley
Too funny Louise!
  

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Reply #4 - Jun 1st, 2010 at 8:58pm
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NIce title Denise, I'm thinking circles as in wedding rings!  Smiley And mabye other hidden meanings.  Smiley
  

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Reply #5 - Jun 1st, 2010 at 9:09pm
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Exactly!  Thanks for sending my mind down that road with your suggestions!  Appreciate it!  Smiley  Actually, lots of interlocking circles in this one.  So this title may last through the final draft!!! (Not all of them do.)
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Reply #6 - Jun 1st, 2010 at 9:17pm
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I'm glad I could help, I was about one third of the way through Soul Mates before the title hit me. Every other story I've done (or planned) I had the title first! Go figure!  Smiley

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Reply #7 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 10:53am
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Oh Globbetts! I read your dedication... I think I shall have to write another Colonel Felt story now and get her married off to a certain Man! Fair's fair after all! Grin

Really enjoying this story... but I enjoy them ALL!
Only problem is |I have LOADS to read/review every morniing, adn trying to catch up is a nightmare!  Shocked


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Reply #8 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 2:30pm
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I know, but isn't it lovely to see everyone being so productive?   Cool  I'm glad you liked the dedication.  It's not necessary to reciprocate.  It was enough to get my very own sex scene!   Smiley  Made my day!  *giggle*
  
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Reply #9 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 3:01pm
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Yes,  but Denise is such fun to write about!
Looking forward to the weddings! - especially mine! Cheesy
Do I get a honeymoon???? Wink
  

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Reply #10 - Jun 2nd, 2010 at 3:11pm
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You're supposed to, but it may get cancelled -- or at least delayed.  Haven't decided yet.  I guess you'll know when I do!  :Smiley

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Reply #11 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 3:14am
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Oops!  Shocked  I just realized that in the time between writing chapter 1 and 2, I somehow replaced Ayshea at radar with Keith!  Guess I need to fix that one.  Wink  Well, there were extenuating circumstances, after all.  I was in Respitio for a few days.  Cool
  
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Reply #12 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 3:17am
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Outstanding Denise, I'm going to have to sharpen my pencil for a proper review! Plus I get to re read the story! Smiley

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Reply #13 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 10:19am
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This is great Denise! reallly enjoy the interplay between Jake and Ginny! ... and Ed stilll missing Alec... WHere is alec by the way??
Looking forward to getting married tomorrow! Grin
  

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Reply #14 - Jun 5th, 2010 at 7:36pm
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Oh how lovely...Keith getting a promotion..and about time too. Very nice! And teh part about them betting on how long it would be befoe he gets bored is SUPER! VEry true as well!

Loed the way Jake handles Paul.......  and Ginny and Jake . Such a good couple
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But I thought i was getting married?
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has my groom changed his mind? Grin
  

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