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Reply #15 - Oct 28th, 2017 at 6:50am
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Write Rat wrote on Dec 8th, 2016 at 9:35am:
just one thing. Straker has no drawer in his shado office and although I know he has that video screen attached to his studio desk (which I always thought wasn't very secure) I don't believe his studio desk has a drawer.  He probably has a cabinet concealed behind a cabinet in his shado office with a fingerprint lock, or a retina scan, he's sneaky as hell. (I've seen too many Bond movies) The error doesn't stand out, my husband only caught it on the second reading. I really loved Straker being in sky one, of course he's a damn fine pilot. And as you depict, a damn fine shot.
ah, unforgettable Straker. Lovely man. (grin)


Hi again all!

I've gone back to 'The Collaborator' and tried to clean it up a bit. My thanks to our noble Librarian for sorting that for me.
  
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Reply #16 - Oct 29th, 2017 at 5:07pm
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Didn't I read that a while back? LOL! I'm forgetting. Thought I gave feedback on that story, SnowLeopard. If I didn't I'll back to re-read. Great to hear back from you. I figured RL was taking control of your life or else it was the aliens that did it. LOL!
  
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Reply #17 - Oct 30th, 2017 at 2:34am
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Hi SnowLeopard,

I enjoyed the re-read. As a bit of an astro-geek myself, I've always been fascinated by that same ice-covered moon...

All the best...
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Reply #18 - Oct 30th, 2017 at 7:04am
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Morning all! (Well, it's morning on this side of the Pond…)

Hi Debbie - no, I think your first feedback was on 'The Keep', you said you enjoyed reading about Paul, which sent me on a very long trip down an intriguing path. It's not over yet! At present I'm working on a follow-up to Brotherhood called NotYetTitledButMightBeCalledBlueBooks. It was supposed to tidy up various loose ends, but generated a lot more than it finished off! Hope to get it ready for release in the next couple of weeks.

Moo - yes, it is a very interesting moon, isn't it…
  
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Reply #19 - Oct 30th, 2017 at 12:51pm
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Since you mentioned doing some changes I went to re-read it and I could have sworn I gave you feedback but it was awhile back when I read it so who knows what happened. But I enjoyed the story the first time and the second was just as good. And yes, I know you told me you were working on the next installment following up to Brotherhood. I figured it would take you awhile and am greatly looking forward to it, SnowLeopard!
Oh and have a Happy Halloween too! Cheesy
  
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