Matt Colonel Offline Everyone at SHADO drinks coffee! Posts: 2391 Location: Coventry, RI Re: Dark Matters Sep 25th, 2010 at 2:11pm Print Post Louise, I'm sorry that one is giving you such a hard time, but I see some excellent work in that trilogy. The alien POV aspect is awesome and you really have a lot of good stuff going on. I certainly would recommend holding on to it in it's present form and shelve it for a while, even if it takes a year. Then take another look at it with a fresh perspective. It's a brilliant piece of work! Just my thoughts. What do you mean, we're out of coffee! WWW IP Logged
MkIXHawk Captain Offline We need to defend ourselves... Posts: 175 Location: Kent Re: Dark Matters Reply #1 - Sep 25th, 2010 at 3:01pm Print Post I concur - Edge of Armageddon has been over 10 years in the writing - I wrote virtually nothing for over 5 years WWW IP Logged