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Neesierie
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FDK Another Place and Time
Aug 28th, 2010 at 11:19pm
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Sorry, Matt.  This one is not my Glitch story.  But it wanted to be written.  So maybe I'll have to be late on my August challenge and do it in September.  Okay? 

Anyway, for good or ill, here's what's happening in Straker's world now!  Grin
  
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Reply #1 - Aug 28th, 2010 at 11:43pm
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You have to go where your muse takes you, I'm sure Madame Challenge setter (aka Louise) won't mind as this looks to be another romance filled read! Wink

An interesting title. :Smiley
  

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Reply #2 - Aug 29th, 2010 at 6:06am
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Yeah, but I'm not sure the title will stay the same as the story progresses.  This is one of those weird ones where I don't have a clue how I'm going to get from point A to point B.  I'm as much along for the ride as my readers.  At least, for now.  Actually, I suppose I'm a bit better off than my readers, since I actually know what point B is! *snicker*

I had to revamp their first conversation, since my beta tester said it needed tightening up.  I hate it when she's right.  So I did.  Hope it reads clearer now and doesn't drag.  Chapter two is on its way tomorrow.  (Hey, if I write it fast enough, maybe I can still do Glitch before the end of August!  Or at least get it started.)   :Smiley
  
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Reply #3 - Aug 29th, 2010 at 6:14am
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Those are the best kind! Cheesy I love it when a story takes off on it's own. I've had three of them do that to me so far! Wink
  

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Reply #4 - Aug 29th, 2010 at 7:03am
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Great to see a new story up from Denise!  And will this be the start of another trilogy? who can tell!

Looking forward to more! Wink
  

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Reply #5 - Aug 29th, 2010 at 7:21am
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Trilogy?  How come you always think bigger than I do?  I'll be happy to finish the first story in one piece!  I'm not looking to go for several more.  Not even a sequel.  (But I won't say never, because I know what happens then.)  Grin
  
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Reply #6 - Aug 29th, 2010 at 2:09pm
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Denise. Louise here. Hoping

email message to you.
  

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Reply #7 - Mar 13th, 2011 at 5:27am
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Well, I finally finished this story.  I don't have it posted on this forum anymore, but once my beta tester approves the final chapter tomorrow, I'll put it up on my website and provide a link here.  However, be warned.  It ends on a cliffhanger, so I'm going to have to write a sequel now.  *sigh*  Well, I suppose I shouldn't complain.  At least I finished it!  Cheesy
  

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Reply #8 - Mar 13th, 2011 at 5:31am
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I'm glad you finished this one, I'll look forward to reading it. Wink
  

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Reply #9 - Mar 13th, 2011 at 5:34am
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It's at my forum, but I won't be putting up the final chapter till my daughter gives the nod.  I hope you'll like how it worked out!  Cool
  

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Reply #10 - Mar 13th, 2011 at 11:19am
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Okay.  I reposted it here.  Man.  I really shouldn't post things when I'm tired!    It makes me lazy.

Oh and FYI, I made Straker an alien in this story too!
  

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Reply #11 - Mar 13th, 2011 at 3:41pm
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I like it... I like it... Grin
  

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Reply #12 - Mar 13th, 2011 at 3:51pm
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How did I know that was going to happen? Wink
  

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Reply #13 - Mar 13th, 2011 at 4:16pm
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Because you know me, Matt, and I really enjoy making The Man an alien!
  

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Reply #14 - Mar 13th, 2011 at 4:20pm
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Darn it!  It posted before I was done!  :Smiley

My loving daughter is back home, which means I no longer have her two sweeties at my house.  But the good news is that I read her the last chapter and she approved it with no changes!  Woo-hoo!   Smiley 
So it's up now for your reading pleasure.  The sequel will have to wait a bit.  I'm still doing research for that part of the story.  Not much longer though!  I promise!  Smiley
  

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