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Reply #75 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 6:46pm
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What's a rimshot? Embarrassed
  

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Reply #76 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 7:03pm
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The drum part after a joke! Think Johnny Carson! Smiley
  

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Reply #77 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 7:15pm
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Matt. I'm British. ('Union Jack' smilie here )
Actually , technically ...English ( 'Flag of St George' smilie here instead.. or a dragon will do!)
Or even a' Red Rose' Smilie (Lancastrian and proud of it!)


we don't have Johnny Carson

Whoever he is!!!  Shocked

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Reply #78 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 7:35pm
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That's right, Johnny Carson hosted the Tonight Show for quite a few years! Smiley I didn't know if he was known in the UK. Undecided

So let me switch gears, think Monty Python or Benny Hill! Smiley
  

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Reply #79 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 7:48pm
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Benny Hill, definitely. Monty P didn't go for the rimshotl so much to get the jokes through. Benny did when he monologued.
  
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Reply #80 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 8:01pm
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Oh.. Benny Hill   Angry... mmm. Sad

the fastest milkman in the west..

preferred Dave Allen 
  Sorry. Grin

Look... I'm from Lancashire.. we have a warped sense of humour here.
Liveerpool adn all that.
Liverpool 'Bucket list       'one thing to do in Liverpool before you die? .........  Leave.'
  

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Reply #81 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 9:22pm
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Not to be annoying (well, all right, I'm being annoying) but I really think Virginia would have hit Will, not slapped him. She must have some self defense training in her somewhere, and while she might not have hit full force, I suspect the lady would have connected quite well with some part of Will's anatomy.

Just a thought.

other than that, nicely played, very nicely played.
  
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Reply #82 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 9:30pm
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That's coming! Next bit, in a bit. Cheesy

Yes she does remember her training! Wink Stay tuned!
  

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Reply #83 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 9:33pm
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Actually, Dragon, when I read it, I was thinking knee to the groin.  Wink  But I didn't say anything, because I didn't want to stop Matt from getting to the end!  :Smiley
  
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Reply #84 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 10:06pm
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Not quite the end, but certainly the climax! Wink

I thought about that too but I wanted to keep the drama at a high point! Wink

And stay true to the facts in the journal! Smiley
  

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Reply #85 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 10:25pm
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Great save!  Cheesy

Of course, it had to be Ed who saves her!   Wink

Do we get an epilogue here?  Cool
  
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Reply #86 - Jul 12th, 2010 at 11:40pm
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Yes, They still have to get back! Not to mention the twist at the end. Wink

And Louise wants to know what was in the sketchbook! Cheesy

(I've been taking dragon lessons!) Cheesy
  

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Reply #87 - Jul 13th, 2010 at 2:27am
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I reposted chapter five with a few minor revisions and added a bit. I fugure one more chapter then an epilogue! Smiley

And a twist at the end! Cheesy
  

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Reply #88 - Jul 13th, 2010 at 7:11am
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Nice!  Cool

I always like it when a handsome guy comes to the rescue Wink

and a happy ending!
Ahhhh! Smiley

One thing...six weeks for Virginia... was it that long for Ed?

Like the way you solved the problem of the Cartwrights and making sure the UFO was buried so that they could find it in the future to rebury it.!

(my brain is hurting again.)

Poor Ben. He'll have to go and find another woman to be his next victim  ooops, sorry, wife!

Ed in cowboy outfit... Hmmmmm!!!! :Smiley
  

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Reply #89 - Jul 13th, 2010 at 12:36pm
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Same time for Ed, I forgot to add the date! Wink

Ed and Keith in cowboy outfits! Cheesy That's why Paul couldn't keep a straight face! Grin

It's not quite over yet, they still have to get back, and I've got a twist at the end that Dragon would be proud of! Wink

I almost forgot, Virginia's sketch pad, need to know what's in there! :Smiley
  

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