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FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva
Sep 19th, 2010 at 3:28pm
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Here we go again! Smiley
  

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Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva
Reply #1 - Sep 19th, 2010 at 3:56pm
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It's good to see people posting again - it's good to be able to post again.

Good start on this - I do read, even if I don't comment much.
  

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Reply #2 - Sep 19th, 2010 at 4:43pm
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Hi Matt,

oyeh - poor Ginny! And you come out meaner to Straker than Louise or Dragon! 

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Reply #3 - Sep 19th, 2010 at 5:46pm
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So glad that someone else is mean to Ed.. not just me.

A very tempting start to the story Matt.  A totally unexpected turn of events..! Wink

 
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but while there's moonlight and music  and love and romance.....

Let's face the music and dance!!


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Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva
Reply #4 - Sep 19th, 2010 at 6:57pm
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Mean to Ed? Huh Oh, you must mean pairing him back up with Mary! Wink In this universe Mary has grown up (kinda like Full Circle). Smiley

Now poor Ginny, I'm certainly being mean to her, she's in love with Ed and ends up getting jilted. Cry And no Matt in this universe to comfort her. Break out the vodka! Grin
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Reply #5 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 7:15am
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A great start to Chapter 1. I like the more detailed conversation with the descriptions, easy and 'comfortable' to read to read if you get my drift!

A very promising scenario.
  

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Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva
Reply #6 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 3:56pm
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I had to adjust the time period a bit. This one takes place nine months after Timelash instead of three. That would put this story in January of 1985, by my timeline. (Right in the middle of the Russian winter!) Wink
  

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Reply #7 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 4:12pm
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Hi Matt,

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Right in the middle of the Russian winter!


Ouch.
  
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Reply #8 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 4:59pm
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I added a tad more to chapter 1. Poor Ginny, she's going to hate me after this story. Cry
  

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Reply #9 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 8:25pm
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And the plot thickens! A bit more added to chapter one. Shocked
  

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Reply #10 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 9:40pm
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Mmmmm .... this should be intriguing ... and that's exactly the word I wanted ... LOL.
  
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Reply #11 - Sep 20th, 2010 at 10:54pm
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Intriguing; Data's way of saying Facinating! Wink

Just posted a bit more, one more scene should wrap up the chapter! Smiley
  

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Re: FDK Heartbreak on the Moskva
Reply #12 - Sep 21st, 2010 at 8:48pm
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Chapter one is done! Smiley
  

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Reply #13 - Sep 21st, 2010 at 9:00pm
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Hi Matt,

love it so far!!!  Grin

(that will change if Ed marries Mary again... grumblegrumble...)
  
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Reply #14 - Sep 21st, 2010 at 9:13pm
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The Ed/Mary aspect is superficial although in this universe Mary as grown considerably since they divorced so she's not like we saw in the series. I needed to get Ginny into a place of hurt and jealousy and using Mary was one of several scenerios I had considered. Wink

As I said before Ginny may never speak to me again after this. Grin I'm going to be really mean to her. Cry
  

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